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In the Meadow

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In the Meadow

The shadow on the crystal lake water Comes from a young girl very sweet and pure She’s a charmer, people want to see her For her skin’s so smooth, and her smile’s a lure Eyes that sure resemble puppy dog’s eyes Her soft hand makes ripples where water lies Tenderly she brings water to her face No part of her body is out of place Droplets drip down her face and to her heart Allowing those around to see beauty Her presence is very cute to impart No one can deny her inner psyche Sadly she will never stay at this age I’ll always love my girl, at any stage
Russell Sivey Entered into Dana'lynn Smith's "In The Meadow" contest 4/18/2013

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:44:00 PM
    very tender write... I had to come see yours to see if you had a creepy one too, lol. not creepy but beautiful :) good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:27:00 PM
    well done here Russell, as it should be spoken of...

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 2:02:00 PM
    love this beautiful sweet write, Russell

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:32:00 AM
    A beautiful poem Russell; I love it. It will do great in the contest. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:05:00 AM
    Ahhh!!!Winner in my book..Good luck..Very poetic ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 3:19:00 AM
    This is beautiful Russell... Good luck in the contest~A.O

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:40:00 PM
    Wonderful, inspiring beauty and love in the heart. A marvelous picture!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:34:00 PM
    so heartfelt and beautiful write..enjoyed so very much your fabulous talent <3 :) Sk

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 5:38:00 PM
    I like the way you skip to aabb rhyming in the second verse. This is lovely! Perfect 10-syllable lines and a tender sentiment. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:24:00 PM
    a nice picture you have painted of this girl. Yes, it would be wonderful to capture beauty at a specific moment and keep it forever that fresh!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 7:13:00 AM
    Lovely words Russell I hope you will keep them for your daughter....Seren

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 6:20:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem to a lovely daughter by a very proud father! - Luck in contst Russell. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)