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~In The Light~ (Villanelle ) There was something not right this dark night It came creeping slowly by Passing through before it was light It filled the forest with a glow bright She grew so frightened she did cry There was something not right this dark night And as she ran all the while in fright She quickly gazed at the dark sky high Passing through before it was light In the dark she closed her eyes tight Praying in her mind to God she didn't die There was something not right this dark night Of sudden she stopped as she saw an sprite Star like did gleam in those very tiny eyes Passing swiftly before it was light Now she had something about she could write As more sprites fairies flew 'round oh my! There was something not right this dark night Passing through before it was light. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 January.26.2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/27/2015 8:24:00 AM

Dorian, 7, another beautiful spiritual poem. Blessings dear friend eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 6:04:00 PM

Hello Eve ! Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/26/2015 3:57:00 PM

Great imagery and I can see the sprites dancing around in the darkness. A wonderful poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 6:02:00 PM

Hello M. L. Kiser ! Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

James Peranteau

Date: 1/26/2015 2:27:00 PM

Just beautiful Dorian ! I so love dreaming dear poet....and oh how far into the dream you placed me with this awesome write ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 6:01:00 PM

Hello James! Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. You too James! You're very sweet!:) I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2015 2:13:00 PM

- I dreamed me far away in your words and pictures ..... beautifully written, dear Dorian !!!! ... (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 6:00:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise!Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. You're very sweet!:) I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/26/2015 10:04:00 AM

Work of a creative dreamer Sweet D. Want to see your own painting. I know painting is your another passion.Love>rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:58:00 PM

Hello Rajat!Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/26/2015 9:47:00 AM

Etheric writing, dear Dorian! A seven!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:57:00 PM

Hello Demetrios!Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

David Meade

Date: 1/26/2015 9:32:00 AM

Loved this poem . . . it captured my imagination and I was gliding through the dark! Another signature write from your pen . . . 7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:56:00 PM

Hello David !Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

D. Steel

Date: 1/26/2015 8:43:00 AM

Beautifully written and perfectly whimsical. For a moment I was transported! Thank you :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:55:00 PM

Hello D. Steel !Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments as always. I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^