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In the Heat of Battle

Amisdt the lull of flying rockets and shells I stare at this photo and feel terribly sad My Grandfather, cut down in youth; my Dad, bound in a chair, with legs, iron clad Mom with foresight, had it sealed in plastic, to keep it safe away from the damp She may have dreamt on some dark night that I'd spend time in this cold swamp Although sheets of rain fall endlessly fast, intermittent sunlight cast out warm rays So often this brings some comfort and the hope, that all this will end soon, some day Knee deep in rice fields we tread, with deadly snakes; critters running for dear life Frightened by sounds of hell's orchestra accompanied by fires and strange light So many buddies lay in final sleep; I am numb; I no longer feel lucky to be alive Unaware of where or who the enemy is; bearing no special distinction from allies And I believe, this is a horrible joke being played designed to steal souls of men What else is hidden as we grimly watch our friends' bodies packed in bags to send In the heat of battle we stand brave; but cry for Mothers as we lie in this trench Any atempts to conceive how is this serving my country, in fury my fists would clench In this shadow of death I make peace with my maker as death may take me away How arrogant and delusional to believe that destiny can be circumvented this way.. ~*~
For Miranda Lambert's "World War of Vietnam" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/9/2011 4:09:00 AM
enjoyed the way you have handled this Nette, a real good piece..
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Date: 4/18/2011 7:51:00 AM
In the Heat of the Battle is impossible to erase from the mind of a Veteran....You brought out all the memories of conflict that few Vets will (understandably) speak of. A good write ..thank you ...Judy
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:30:00 AM
I am going to sound repetitive here but this is one profound write you have here Annalise, wishing you all the best for Miranda's contest, love wilma
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Date: 4/16/2011 10:10:00 AM
There are no true victors in a war, so the ones on the losing end are far too many, and no good ever came out of it. Such a tragedy, and your poem reminds us greatly of that. Best of luck to you, Annalise! Thanks for your comments on my tanka..made me smile. I got my plate pretty full now, so I'm satiated for the meantime. Maybe when I get hungry, I'll eat more words ;)
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Date: 4/16/2011 8:16:00 AM
Powerful write and i totally agree with you on this outstanding write. War is something I am totally against. Better solutions could be found and worked out if only we had better people running things. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:59:00 AM
Yes, I agree entirely with Andrea - this is such a powerful poem, Annalise. Well done on such a realistic account of war.
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:30:00 PM
this is one POWERFUL poem. Gosh, I think i have seen at least five now that are outstanding and this is one of them. I can't even begin to write a poem for this contest. Don't have it in me, but I admire what I am reading. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:28:00 PM
very touchy and moving account of what happened in the Vietnam war, Annalise
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