In the Grass

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Entry: "In The Grass" Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco

Deadline - April 17, 2023

2nd Place

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The blades of grass, a sea of green They calm the day and set the scene The world around me seems to slow Sedately into grass I go So in the grass, I lay my head And daisies like a featherbed Dancing lightly upon my skin Thoughts so tranquil with taction thin A breeze comes by and rustles through As blades of grass construct a clue To show the world is still alive As nature’s rhythm will arrive And in the grass, I find my peace With nature's song, a sweet release The worries of the world depart Both in the grass and in my heart

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Len Gasun

Date: 5/31/2023 8:13:00 PM

Beautiful and serene. Congratulations on your second win dear Andy! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs

Andy Chunn
Date: 6/1/2023 4:44:00 PM

I appreciate your kind words Len. Thank for the feedback and have a blessed day.

Constance La France

Date: 5/30/2023 12:56:00 PM

Andy, a beautifully penned poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, well done !

Andy Chunn
Date: 5/30/2023 2:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment on my poem. Best wishes!

Deb M

Date: 3/28/2023 3:53:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Andy….love this poem! Debx

Andy Chunn
Date: 3/29/2023 1:00:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. Now I'm thinking outside the box about who am I. Nicely done!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/28/2023 1:58:00 AM

Great flow and peace in your lovely poem, Andy:)

Andy Chunn
Date: 3/29/2023 12:56:00 PM

Thank you Joanna. I was just reading your poem "Prophet" and thinking how RIGHT you are. I'm not sure I write "rightly" very often but I love to try. Nice job!