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In the Grass

Intimations of Immortality (excerpt) Though nothing can bring back the hour Of splendor in the grass, glory of the flower We will grieve not; rather find Strength in what remains behind William Wordsworth I sat to write a contest poem, Kept hitting an impasse When mem'ries of the brother I lost Came through as clear as glass As minutes turned to hours, I relived them one by one More than once I wiped my tears At all the things we'd done The time got by me quickly Reminiscing for a while But once my tears had all run dry I then began to smile I'm glad he will remain inside Until the time I pass And when death comes, we'll both relive Our "splendor in the grass" 3/26/23 Daniel Turner Steve Turner 1954-1996

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Date: 4/30/2023 6:12:00 PM
I am sorry I missed this POTD. I love it, I love the Whitman quote because it’s so true to reality. Sorry about your brother also. I lost a male cousin when he was 40. A giving, fun, and handsome man, we grew up together.Losing hin at age 40 is still painful.. a well deserved POTD Pangie
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Daniel Turner
Date: 5/1/2023 5:58:00 AM
Thanks sweetie. Losing my only brother was TOUGH. Not a day goes by... Yes it was a good movie. I loved Natalie Wood. Beautiful actress! Always does a body good to see you, Pangie. Be welll my friend:)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/30/2023 6:14:00 PM
That quote was used in the movie, but Whitman gets the credit as you noted. Not the director
Date: 4/24/2023 8:54:00 PM
Such a grand tribute, movingly conveyed in rhyme. Congratulations on such a fine posting. Be well. Brian
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Daniel Turner
Date: 5/1/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Brian. I appreciate your support:)
Date: 4/20/2023 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD - I commented before it was given the honour I'm glad to realise:)
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Date: 4/15/2023 10:19:00 AM
Wow I missed your POTD? This is absolutely a gem. I feel this way for my stepbrother taken too soon from us. I love the reference to Splendor in the grass. It was one of my favorite of the movie's show on tv again and again in the 60s
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Date: 4/1/2023 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Daniel, on POTD! A poignant poem indeed…a longing for your brother. Hugs ~ Kim
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. You're so kind. Have a super weekend:)
Date: 4/1/2023 4:30:00 AM
I missed quite a number of POTD's. This is such a beautiful poem. The genuine feelings for your brother touch the heart deeply. Yes, we all shall become part of Nature one day and we have live on the memories left behind ! Congratulations on your POTD dear Daniel...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2023 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Always a pleasure:) I appreciate your time and support. Have a great weekend.
Date: 3/30/2023 9:46:00 AM
This is wonderful Daniel! It went straight to my heart. Your brother is always with you, waiting until you meet again. Congrats on your well deserved POTD!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Always great to see you. I appreciate your kindness and support. We'll have to get caught up soon. Be well. Enjoy spring:)
Date: 3/30/2023 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on the POTD honor, dear Daniel! Blessings.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios. You are so kind.
Date: 3/29/2023 4:13:00 PM
Dear Daniel: Belated Congratulations on this splendid poem and your POTD honor. I have been behind this as you know but a poem such as this will be a long time enjoyed. The loss of a brother is a deep tragedy to overcome. Sincere wishes, SuZ
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, SuZ. I appreciate your kindness, your support and you insight. I lost my dad and my brother 6 mos. apart. It was my toughest year.
Date: 3/29/2023 8:00:00 AM
Good morning, Daniel. I hope you accept my hand in friendship and let the past between us be bygones. The sentiments you shared in reminiscing about your brother stirred my thoughts. Our memories come to us unbidden, and we cannot embrace the good ones without acknowledging those that are sad. I think being chosen as the poem of the day is not as important to you as it was to write this. I know it couldn't be done without tears.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2023 9:25:00 AM
I will correct that. I forget to even look at that page. Enjoy your day as well.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/29/2023 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna. i appreciate your kind comments and support. As far as you and I as friends, life is too short (at least for me, I'm old) to hold grudges. I moved on long ago. I'm the one who is blocked, not you. You are always welcome on my page. Be well and have a great afternnon:)
Date: 3/29/2023 5:20:00 AM
A very heartfelt and beautiful poem Daniel :-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/29/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Anne. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a wonderful day:)
Date: 3/28/2023 8:31:00 PM
superb and fantastic poem penned on the nature theme; great to read; congrats for beings selected the poem as POTD
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/29/2023 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Mahtab. Great to see you again.
Date: 3/28/2023 8:30:00 PM
Congrats for POTD win.... However why the poem is in rhyme category is humble question. Regards Ashok
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 11/16/2023 9:44:00 PM
Also my deepest sympathy for your brother and respect for your brotherhood.
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 11/16/2023 9:38:00 PM
Dear Daniel I'm not at all qualified about literature and poems... Once just started learning these things... I read your this poem many times by now... With your question I get answer after every reading but it varies... Sometimes I feel like it's free verse and sometimes I feel like rhyme... Today I read it twice... And I realised may be it's the pronunciation in my memory (the way I create sound in my mind while reading) which is creating this conflict...I didn't mean any judgement by my question... I feel I'll improve with reading more and understanding more... Wish you good day ahead
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Ashok. No disrespect, I give up. What's the answer?
Date: 3/28/2023 3:52:00 PM
Hello Daniel, I can tell thatr you were close to your brother. When the time comes you will be together. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2023 12:02:00 PM
Hello Daniel, were you the oldGreat to see you again to Danieest brother. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 5:56:00 PM
Hello Darlene. Yes, very close. My only brother. great to see you again dear Darlene.
Date: 3/28/2023 2:35:00 PM
I love the balance of the quote against the poem and the genuine words spoken. Congratulations on this getting recognised for POTD
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/28/2023 2:50:00 PM
It's beautiful when something unexpected is revealed in poetry that would have perhaps might not have been acknowledged but have been below the surface. The combination together read in an uplifting way, acknowledging sadness but cherishing the person and experiences.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, DD. I was originally trying to write a poem about the quote itself but had no intention of writing about my brother. Thats just where my thoughts took me.
Date: 3/28/2023 2:20:00 PM
Never be sorry about causing someone to cry happy tears Dan, I have been back to my fave list to read it again and it had the same effect, I too have a great one. so glad this was honoured, Congrats.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 2:37:00 PM
Thanks, Wendy. Tell him everyday how much you love him:)
Date: 3/28/2023 12:35:00 PM
Daniel, absolutely beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, constance. You are so kind:)
Date: 3/28/2023 11:15:00 AM
Holding on to beautiful memories, A heartfelt write Daniel, Congrats on POTD
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you,Joseph. Great to see you again.
Date: 3/28/2023 10:43:00 AM
Who needs a poetry muse when you have inspiration like this? Excellent piece, Daniel, and a splendid choice for POTD.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Jim. You're very kind.
Date: 3/28/2023 10:28:00 AM
Very nice, Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jeff. growing up one of my best friends was named Jeff.
Date: 3/28/2023 10:20:00 AM
Great choice for POTD. Poignant and loving tribute, DT. ~;o]
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:50:00 PM
Thanks, AP. Have a greatafternoon.
Date: 3/28/2023 10:09:00 AM
Daniel, this is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Reliving moments and holding memories so close, will bring soft tears. The ones we love that are no longer with us, live in our hearts forever. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. You are sweet. I appreciate your kindness:)
Date: 3/28/2023 9:59:00 AM
Splenderiferous, Daniel! Congrats on POTD! Splendor and splendrous! ~ gw
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:48:00 PM
Thank you, GW.:)
Date: 3/28/2023 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD my friend.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady:)
Date: 3/28/2023 9:20:00 AM
Touching tribute to your brother. Daniel. It touched off a time of remembering my own brother. It took a while but was a wonderful experience. I hope it does the same for many that read this POTD. Congratulations! Have a great day! Bill
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/28/2023 1:47:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. I know it was hard. I am sorry for your loss.
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