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In Some Ways

Different worlds, you and I Is it a blessing or a curse All the luxuries of modern living In some ways times are worse The old man spoke of younger days Time was so much simpler then He thought about the hardships And the struggles way back when The old man said I’ll tell you a story Of how things were long before Of days when families had so little In some ways, so much more He told him of the friendships That had lasted through the years And he spoke of people dead and gone And the young boy saw his tears He talked about the innocence When love was on the wing Looking out his back yard window For the first robin in the spring Playing baseball in an empty lot Sometimes fighting with his brother Picking flowers for a May Altar For Our Lord’s Blessed Mother He talked about his mother’s eyes And how she looked when he upset her Times were very difficult In some ways, so much better He spoke of days when children played Until after dark not knowing fear Of monkey bars and merry go rounds As he shed another tear He knew all the shop owners by name He had never seen a mall Riding his bicycle all summer Rolling in piles of leaves in the fall The young boy smiled and said call it progress We underestimated the cost In some ways I have gained so much And in some ways, I lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2012 1:47:00 PM
Love the story above...pd
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Date: 4/21/2010 2:30:00 PM
An excellent and perceptive write as always...boy I remember monkey bars LOL I got my tongue stuck to one at 8 in a Maine winter playfround! (Never could keep my mouth shut LOL) Light & Love
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:21:00 PM
Dear Vince, Thank you for your participation in my contest and congratulations on your win. This poem touched my heart. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/18/2009 8:00:00 AM
Hi Vince, Congrats on your win in Laine's contest "Tell Me A Story", very well deserved! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:26:00 AM
Congrats Vince on your winning poem in Lainie's contest... well deserved win for an excellent write.. I just was notified that my entry won an honorable mention although not listed "Bird With the Broken Wing".. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie... thankxxx for your blog comments... enjoyed your input to make blogs fun.... "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/18/2009 12:03:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Elaine's contest Vince.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:26:00 PM
I loved this entry when I first read it. It holds the same thoughts and values that I long for and wish were still alive today. Congratulations on your win, Vince. A Merry Christmas to you and your family. God Bless. Carrie
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Date: 12/17/2009 1:32:00 PM
This old man had experiences that made him very wise, Vince. And the young boy's failure to grasp his insights is not surprising. Values have certainly changed as today's children are raised in a more sheltered and affluent manner. Congratulations on your success in Elaine's contest, Vince! Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2009 11:10:00 AM
i absolutly ADORE this piece. thank you sooo much for sharing it ^^ xo Always Rainbow
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Date: 11/11/2009 11:37:00 AM
Very nostalgia write. Those days were better in some ways and worse in others. Bon't want to go back to drawing water from the well and some others. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:13:00 PM
Sometimes I think back to how it was and how it is today and think it was better in yesteryear. We forget how to smile, how to shake a hand, how to be a person. We have become computer and tv junkies and distrustful of the outside world. So so sad. Excellent Vince. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/10/2009 7:28:00 AM
In a world that has changed so much... where kids today have no idea the freedom of playing outside after dark, where neighbor knowing their neighbor seems to be rare, where people were content to sit on their front porches instead of in front of a television or computer...yes.....we have lost so much. I hear your heart in this poem. Well done~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/10/2009 6:26:00 AM
I relate to this piece in every way..wonderful write..the simple form is just right for this poem. BG
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Date: 11/10/2009 6:06:00 AM
A touching write that reminds me how much I appreciate sitting and talking to my grandmother. I love to listen to the stories that she has to share of her youth and the many things she has seen come to pass. It is a precious gift to have the chance to listen and learn from her. Thank you for the reminder to call her today and tell her how much I love and appreciate her. A great write full of so much truth and vivid imagery my friend. Smiles from Lolita
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