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In My Moonlight Dream

In my moonlight dream we’re dancing in a forest. Green earth is our floor - and moon beams - our disco ball while soft music is the night. You are clad in white. My golden gown sweeps the ground. My beautiful knight - Your bright eyes adore me as you twirl me among the trees. For the Moonlight Dreams Poetry Contest by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/12/2020 11:26:00 AM

A lovey whimsical joy to read, Andrea. Congrats.

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/3/2013 9:40:00 AM

I love the juxtaposition of nature imagery and 'civilization' imagery. I'm not sure if you intended this, but it's almost like you're synthesizing both society and nature and being okay with existing simultaneously both? Kind of saying 'SCREW YOU!' to Thoreau.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/3/2013 2:35:00 PM

you are funny. Nope, thoreau was not on my mind here. haha

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/4/2011 4:27:00 PM

I think I commented on this the first time I read it, it was beautiful then and it still is now, congrats andrea!

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 9:57:00 AM

This has such a peaceful flow to it Andrea. A very nice write. Congratulations

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/4/2011 3:49:00 AM

Hi friend! How are you? Congratulation on your sweet win. Thanks, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/4/2011 12:50:00 AM

i love dancing, andie.. sweet congrats to you for a lytical, winning entry! :) huggs .. soup mail!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/3/2011 10:57:00 PM

Wonderful concept,fine write.I love your forest settings..."dancing in a forest,moon beams-our disco ball......."Continue to dance in the euphoria of your win,Andrea.Congratulations!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 12/3/2011 9:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win....Anoucheka

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/3/2011 8:35:00 PM

This poem has a charm of its own,Andrea.Congratulations on your great win!

Dalila Agtani

Date: 12/2/2011 11:29:00 PM

Andrea Dreamy moonlight! What a delight to dream under the moonbeam! I feel the magic in your poem. Thanks for visiting my corner. Love, Dalila

Don Johnson

Date: 12/1/2011 11:23:00 PM

yes it flows with some magic goes, very well done here...

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/1/2011 8:52:00 PM

Wonderful romantic poem. Such a dream happens when honey bee carries honey during the young age. Very very sweet, my friend.bl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/28/2011 1:21:00 PM

This is such a sweet and romantic take on Tracie's photo, Andrea! Now I even have that song in my head, not sure of the title, "Under the Lover's Moon" or something? I like how you gave this about romance-- eep I will reply to email by tomorrow ok? Yeeks. I better sleep...hugs to you!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/28/2011 8:43:00 AM

lovely imagery - dreamlike indeed, and fanciful. love it! especially the twirling in the last line :)

Anne Rutherford

Date: 11/27/2011 4:18:00 AM

Andrea this is every girls dream.Beautiful and conveys a delightful feeling.Anne soup mail

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/26/2011 6:21:00 PM

I love the disco ball, I guess the stars are flickering around it, adding to the romance. The places we can go in our dreams... enjoyed...Luv Margaret

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/26/2011 12:00:00 PM

A dreamy piece with you handsome knight. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/24/2011 7:14:00 PM

Yes, sounds like a lot of us would like to join you in this dream! Lovely! LT

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/24/2011 5:16:00 PM

The middle of the evening brings a lunar ecstasy. A maiden waits for Galahad to bring her to her knees. The midnight air makes him sit and stare. As she spins her yarns of love. And when the morning sun comes up there's two stars up above.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/25/2011 8:29:00 AM

Me likes that rhyme!!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/24/2011 12:29:00 PM

Gosh I love this Andrea, a girl can still dream can't she?? All the best with this gem :) Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family ;) love Wilma

Andrew Crisci

Date: 11/24/2011 10:10:00 AM

It's awesome, Andrea! You are a romantic at heart...a real princess looking for the the knight in shining armor, and I hope you have found him! Good luck in the contest...it's a lovely entry. Have a Happy Thanksgiving Day. Hugs, Andrew.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 11/24/2011 10:04:00 AM

Happy Thanksgiving to you, Andrea. I hope your are enjoying this blessed day with your loved ones. Thanksgiving Day is a day of reflection...being thankful for our blessings. I like to thank you for your comments and support...they have up-lifted me and given me confidence. They are special friends in my life, and you certainly are one of them. May God bless you and answer your prayers. Hug, Andrew.

James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2011 9:36:00 AM

Dreamy, dreamy and double dreamy Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/23/2011 8:59:00 PM

This is beautiful, Andrea. The imagery is so romantic. Thank you for all your sweet comments on my work. Happy Thanksgiving! God Bless. Kim

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/23/2011 8:41:00 PM

you can tell your a school teacher because you still have school girl dreams. and no, fat guys have the same dream. hahahaha.