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In my bag

In my bag, 
Thirty years
Over depressed tears     
And a gloomy tale’s slag,
 Among these, fickles
Our history,
And a bitter taste trickles,
Deep in my bag;
Our story,
On drafts, lines of poetry,
With smell of burnt success,
And sound, of never mind, kiss
And echoes of something else, 
Your broken barrette,
Half of my last cigarette,
Witnessing my dead habit,
With your funny picture,
Pretending to be richer,
Ashen white and black,
With smiles hidden deep
In the dark;
In shades, ready to weep.
 Seething with silent passion, 
 In a bag of an old fashion,
Smothered in tight heaven,
Soothed themselves in haven
In the depth,
Without a breath,
I keep blessing before death.

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:29:00 PM
    Jamal, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:38:00 AM
    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Jamal. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:25:00 PM
    wooow..i like it..nicely written..=)

    Abboud Avatar jamal Abboud
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for kind words and comment.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:09:00 PM
    It was a "heavy" bag, Jamal. - A very well written and touching poem! Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Abboud Avatar jamal Abboud
    Date: 10/25/2012 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is still " heavy" Thanks for nice comment. Blessings.