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In Her Cups

at peace but alone a feeling wholeness lingers pondering the space where once there was tea for two now there is but one cold cup

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Deborah Burch

Date: 4/9/2012 11:03:00 PM

Congratulations (late) on this wonderful piece!!! I adore it! Well Done love,deb

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2012 2:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this touching piece, Debbie! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 10:38:00 PM

DEBBIE , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

Eye Of The Storm

Date: 4/3/2012 12:04:00 AM

very nice this is jimmy;

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/2/2012 9:25:00 PM

Very deceiving Debbie. I enjoyed. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2012 3:34:00 PM

congrats Debbie on an awesome win for this exquisite write .. I so luv this piece luv.. a winning wonder ..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/24/2012 6:01:00 PM

Your poem is so perfect you don't need the picture, but I enjoyed it too. Very moving.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2012 3:29:00 PM

Sweet and touching Debbie, company misses for the one cup. Have a lovely weekend to you Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2012 3:10:00 PM

This is beautiful, Deb. It really highlights the loneliness she feels. Come and visit and I'll make tea for fwo. Love, Carolyn

David Williams

Date: 3/23/2012 12:40:00 PM

great tanka Debbie, very thought provoking, A giant marrow is the answer to your question, they get very defenceful, couples have ended up divorced over it...David

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/23/2012 11:46:00 AM

We need to warm up that second cup so you are not alone. Lovely write Deb. Hugs Phyl

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/23/2012 9:38:00 AM

Aw gee..this touches right to the heart's core..One for my favourites-Charma

Rascal Jones

Date: 3/23/2012 8:07:00 AM

Goodness, Debbie! It is hard to imagine a more well-struck Tanka than this one, and your "turn" at the third line is the perfect surprise...after setting the mood for ease you've splashed it with bittersweet hues. "pondering the space" is sheer brilliance. You've shared the birth and death of a relationship in a teacup...remarkable! And, you've done it in perfect form and moment. Such a pleasure to read a master's work, Debbie. Thank you ever-so warmly! Rascal

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/23/2012 9:23:00 AM

wow that's one great comment..

Kash Poet

Date: 3/23/2012 7:23:00 AM

Very touching write.So much told in few lines.Best wishes Debi.

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/23/2012 7:17:00 AM

simply lovely Debbie.. xxx Hugs