In Glee

When hearts are torn in sorrow And days await weeks to borrow A scented Eurasian herb called yarrow I stand afar in glee; When blessings are so nearby in mass And hedgehogs hop upon the green-grass On a melody for a dancer trying a chasse I stand afar in glee; When love is the surname of every being Shimmering sincerity and guaranteeing Its rank in holiness and power of freeing I stand afar in glee! © Guru Jad 2013

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Heather Ober

Date: 5/19/2013 9:49:00 AM

This is such a creative write! You chose such unique rhymes and the message is just wonderful. I love it :)

Guru Jad
Date: 5/19/2013 4:15:00 PM

Heather Ober.. I feel total bliss with your comment. Thank you a load for your presence here.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/4/2013 8:04:00 AM

i too love the sentiment here, the structure of your poem, is amazing...

Guru Jad
Date: 3/5/2013 6:29:00 AM

Mr. Horsman... Thank you for your lovely visit and comment.. Very happy you have liked the poem! Have a great day!

Dave Timperley

Date: 2/28/2013 2:09:00 PM

'tis refreshing to read your stuff. You have a great command of words past. Glee is one of them, with this I wait to read more and more from you. 'tis nearing the witching hour and Morphius awaits. Good night and God Bless. D.

Guru Jad
Date: 2/28/2013 4:16:00 PM

Dear Dave, I am fond of old words. In my perspective, they have a latent power. When I read for writers or poets from the past centuries, eloquence words are found in every corner. I bid you good dreams and hope the Winged Daemon would be gentle with you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2013 10:52:00 AM

I really like this one..I have never seen a Hedgehog in real life..They must be interesting creatures..I have had two plants both of which were called Yarrow..They were totally different though...Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Guru Jad
Date: 2/26/2013 3:49:00 PM

Dear Sara, thank you for stopping by. Hedgehogs are really strange, especially their pines, which they use for defence in attack by throwing them. As kids, we used to collect them to use as quills for writing. Excellent things! As for yarrows, they are lovely herbs of many benefits.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 2:22:00 PM

Hi Guru, making one more stop to welcome you to the poetry soup. I hope you will enjoy your time here. I sure am looking forward into reading more of your poetry. always~ LINDA

Guru Jad
Date: 2/25/2013 3:11:00 PM

Your visit is a Welcome by itself.. My post is adorned with your comment. I must thank your magical presence. Thank You!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 2:08:00 PM

Dear Guru, to only reach and touch what stands in a distance. I love the good feeling and calling of glee, waiting for you. and love is my name... I'm drawn to the surname of my being in every way. thank you for the magical feeling... i felt a bit lost reading the sorrow hint through your poem, and still the light shines...xox~ PD

Guru Jad
Date: 2/25/2013 3:10:00 PM

Dear Linda, We tend to seek happiness in all of its forms, but I believe that there is much more happiness in us when we feel it surrounding us rather than only being graced by it. It is a supreme goal. The hint of sorrow is: When I see broken and wounded hearts healed by the power of magical effect of yarrow (a herb from the Greek times said to be used for healing wounds), I feel happy!

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/22/2013 6:16:00 PM

After reading your first posting, I am further convinced you have a home here for as long as you wish to stay! Kudos!

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 7:58:00 PM

I am must be blessed for receiving such a praise from you, sir. At least, I am in an extreme bliss. Thank you for honoring me with your visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 5:59:00 PM

what a cute repeating line at the end of each stanza. Reminds me of kyrielle form!!

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 7:54:00 PM

You are right. It is similar to it in a way, save the fact that most kyrielles are of religious attributes. Thank you for visiting the page and reading the post.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/22/2013 5:40:00 PM

Soup Mail

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 7:51:00 PM

Done! :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/22/2013 5:32:00 PM

Hi Jad Thanks for taking so much time to read my poems. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Mind you your responses are poetic on their own.

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 7:51:00 PM

You are most welcome. I still have not finished all of your poems. Your writings are most illuminating!!

Donna Jones

Date: 2/22/2013 3:59:00 PM

I loved the sincerity and guaranteeing line...just lovely....welcome...from Eileen to me to you. :-)

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 4:52:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciated visit and lovely comment. Extremely glad that you have liked it!!! And I am truly thankful for your welcome :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/22/2013 2:43:00 PM

Come close friend, you will like what you see. Eileen directed me to you, welcome to the soup.

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 3:11:00 PM

I chose to stand afar to take a better and keen look, for reading people and life is not as reading a book... My time to meddle in shall come one day, I am sure, and then what I have gained could stand as a ready cure! Mr. Lamoureux, I am honored to be welcomed by you. Thank you!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/22/2013 1:54:00 PM

Welcome my friend to our PS, your poem a marvel of human concern! Thank you for sharing!

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 2:28:00 PM

Mr. Trifiatis, I have read many of your poems to which I found my words are too frail to comment on them... So, it is my very good honour to stretch out my thankfulness for adorning my post with your precious comment. Most appreciated.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/22/2013 12:08:00 PM

OH MY GOODNESS! I LOVE IT! WOW! What an awesome poem, my dear! :) Thanks for sharing! My favorite line..."When love is the surname of every being." WOW!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/22/2013 1:05:00 PM

:) You know me so well!

Guru Jad
Date: 2/22/2013 12:18:00 PM

Thank you a million times!! Has it not been forged by your encouragement, no muses would have visited me! And to tell you the truth, the line you liked the most is the same line I predicted it would catch your attention!!