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In A Meadow

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In A Meadow

In the meadow the two would meet
Quietly, quickly and oh, so discreet
Her scent would overpower him with uncontrollable lust
The sight of him,his strength, his overpowering musk
Briefly these two a moment they'd share
Out of sight from the world so no one could stare
He would gently rub his body up to hers
And willingly,she'd give herself a total immerse
Staring into each other's eyes filled with desire
The lust between the both of them never seemed to tire
Sweet lovers glistening under the summers heat
Both were spent from passions of these lovers so sweet
He would rise and turn from her leaving her alone
Shortly after him, she would slowly roam
Until another day when these two lovers would meet
This black stallion and fair young mare, a foal soon to greet

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:06:00 PM
    High marks for the surprise ending. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:15:00 PM
    hahaha, a horse tale!!! what a great twist!!!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 5:03:00 PM
    A love poem for horses. I didn't see it till the end. Well done, great flow and rhyme. Thanks for your kind words about my poem, O'er The Battlements I Do Roam. Thanks, Terry.

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 6:50:00 PM
    Yes, very nicely written, Jen. And raunchy. - Red

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Ah a horse lover, fine animals best when running free. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 1:51:00 PM
    For the contest? Its great, Jennifer...a little mysterious too

    Oliver Avatar Jennifer Marie Oliver
    Date: 4/16/2013 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I wanted to spice it up a bit. I usually don't write this sensual,but when talking about horses, I can. Thought I'd try my hand at it. I knew where I was going just had to try and get there.
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 9:12:00 AM
    Very descriptive and a pleasure to read.

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 8:57:00 AM
    Massive intensity here! Embrace the simple pleasures. Nice work!