In a Heartbeat

Deep underground hear the moaning sounds Of all the other forgotten Lovers Who forever cry to one another- That life was well 'til Love was found!

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/3/2014 6:45:00 PM

Chan The Man This is a creative and unique write. I like how you put this poem together. Very different but interesting. Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Crazy Friends poem. Huggies

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/4/2014 9:52:00 AM

Thanks as always, Sweet Pea <3

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/19/2013 11:04:00 PM

You have a great sense of irony. Terrific poem with a super title. Well done :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/19/2013 11:12:00 PM

Thank you; it makes me happy that you recognize and appreciate the irony. I wasn't too sure about posting this one, but your read and response makes me glad I did. Thanks again! :)