I'M Coming

I'm coming dear, I'm coming there, The day has been long, And for home I so long, The buzzing of the buses, The street noises, Have filled my head, And my heart is dead, My joints ache, My head rotates, Spins, Till it feels, Like a street football, But I'm coming dear, Spray the house, With your smile, Tie your joy, To the door posts, Smear your embrace, On it's hinges, Rain your sweetness, All through the bedroom space, I'm coming home dear, I'm coming, For your healing touch, Your tight embrace, Your warm presence, ....That revives life. Word Craft 2013

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2013 3:11:00 AM

- Miss your beautiful poem,Word !!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Opondi Ougo
Date: 8/20/2013 6:24:00 AM

Thanks dearie...i have been working on my first anthology and now I'm done..kindly let me have your email address so i can send you a pdf version.I'd appreciate your perspective..thanks, you can send me a message so i can get yours,mine is opougo@gmail.com

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 2/15/2013 8:47:00 AM

Woow, really romantic, really a lovely poem for a lovely day :D glad for reading this one tonight :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/19/2013 2:40:00 AM

oh thanks dear..Wishing you a beautiful day too....smiles..:-)

Mari Banks

Date: 2/14/2013 9:10:00 PM

"Spray the house with your smile, tie your joy to the door posts smear your embrace on its hinges . . . I think I'm in love with this poem! Lol thanks for sharing this. M

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/15/2013 2:54:00 AM

Oh my....and am in love with your comment already dear...Thanks Mari i'm so humbled,do have yourself a beautiful day :-)

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2013 11:42:00 AM

Word, wow I love this and a big welcome...David

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/15/2013 2:52:00 AM

Aww David..thank you sir..i'm much humbled..i feel like family each and every day..poetry soup is such an awesome family thank you..and do have a good day :-)

Jennifer Spase

Date: 2/14/2013 9:30:00 AM

love takes on demands too, yep. good view.

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/15/2013 2:50:00 AM

Thank you Jenny...love is such a beautiful thing...a blessed thing :-)...lovely day dear :-)

Len Gasun

Date: 2/14/2013 8:19:00 AM

A great and passionate write you've penned my dear friend, WC! I enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by leaving a wonderful comment on one of my poems. Happy Valentines Day! hugs, Leonora

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/15/2013 2:48:00 AM

Oh thank you Galinta ...you've got beautiful writes too..i learnt a lot from that piece..thank you and do have yourself a good day..hugs :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/14/2013 6:04:00 AM

My dear Sir, you a very romantic poet! I loved your poem. It so true, so real, so full of human qualities!

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/15/2013 2:44:00 AM

Thank you Sir..your views always inspire..i promise not to dissapoint..once again thank you Sir :-)

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/14/2013 5:29:00 AM

A most nostalgic one for those away from home... Wonderful poem,Word Craft....

Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/14/2013 5:34:00 AM

Oh...thank you Veetil..I wrote it in the bus yesterday evening going home...:-)