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I'M a Survivor

I never thought that I would be free Yes, free from negativity I never thought that I would be a meteor And crash from the dead galaxy Of mistrust, disgust, rejection Of lies, deceit, greed, and torment I never thought that I could survive Without the malicious you in my life Without anger, pain, self-hate and strife All of the sharp objects that I was born into And severely cut and bruised me Are falling like missiles with motion Of projectiles: Poverty, racism, lackadaisical teaching. I’m surviving finally free from Not thinking that I was wonderfully made Because I didn’t have the same star quality As someone else. Not ever feeling true love Because I was seeking it in the wrong region of space Dealing with corrupted minds of aliens From asteroids of arrogance and angst. I never thought I would fall into the heavens Of positivity I never thought that I would take off my goggles And say that I survived the mission I never thought I would be on board Traveling many light years as the captivated cadet Of hostility Nasty nebula was mission control. I say it now I’m on a new mission As a prosperous captain Of confidence It may pull me down Stronger than gravity’s force sometimes But I have a made up mind I’m standing firmly with an upside down frown Mighty motivation is mission control. I say it now and I say it bold To all of lavish aliens living In the galaxy of lustful lies I know that I will survive To all that jolt around in the Jupiter of jealousy I’m going to hop in on the Halley’s Comet of hatred Happily I’m a survivor and I will travel many more light years Happier.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2009 2:50:00 AM
Thank U for your nice comment! I really liked the thought process in this poem.It says soooo much!God bless, Prince
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:13:00 PM
I have to agree with Anthony and Jared, an excellent write Nicole>>James
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:02:00 PM
Another excellent write to join your others. Nice job.
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:02:00 PM
Keep traveling, and I will be right there with you along your journey through your words.....EXCELLENT write Nicole.....
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