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I'M a 9 Revised

Zira You bring me peace With your head on my lap I gently stroke your wavy hair Lovingly I bend to kiss your forehead Thanking God for giving me you You have become my calm My loyal friend Zira Written by Brenda Meier-Hans Used my Path Number 9 09.15.2014 For Contest: Tell me your Number Andrea Dietrich 3rd

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2014 5:59:00 PM

Lovely...sweet ... and gentle......and it flows. I assume this is a pet dog or cat. Congrats on a merited win, Brenda! // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/6/2014 8:22:00 PM

Thank you Paul. She's my 4 year old Dog.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/5/2014 6:55:00 PM

Lovely piece,Brenda...Congrats on your well deserved win..

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 10:37:00 PM

Thanks Olusegun

Roy Jerden

Date: 10/5/2014 6:01:00 AM

What a great subject to write about! Congratulations, loved it!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:53:00 PM

Thanks Roy.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/5/2014 5:30:00 AM

aww this is a heart warming one, about a beloved pet, I gather - congrats on your win in the contest :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:51:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte.

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/4/2014 4:17:00 PM

Congrats, Brenda; I love the love I feel in this poem. Hope you are doing well.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Faye, all is well.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/4/2014 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning piece, Brenda, enjoyed reading it again.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:58:00 PM

Thanks Reason.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/4/2014 12:12:00 PM

A beautiful piece about unrequited love...hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:57:00 PM

Oh, mama loves her baby.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/4/2014 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations, Brenda!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:56:00 PM

Thanks Hija

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/4/2014 10:55:00 AM

Great tribute n a brilliant write Brenda! Congrats on ur awesome win my good friend!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Dr. Sharma

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/4/2014 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on this beneficial win that might expose this gem to more readers. !CONGRATULATIONS BRENDA!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 10:19:00 AM

Thanks Maurice, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/4/2014 8:21:00 AM

This poem pays homage to pets. They use animals in hospitals because of all the benefits they provide. I love, love, love this poem.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2014 5:52:00 AM

Nice write on pet, congrats on the win, Brenda

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2014 4:09:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2014 1:52:00 AM

Who could not fall in love with this one? It's sweet as can be. Congrats in my contest, number 9.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/25/2014 11:17:00 PM

Would like to meet your Zira, pets can be like children in many ways. A lovely rictameter to honor him/her. Wishing you the best in the contest to a friend who shares my number - 9.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:25:00 AM

Thanks Reason. She is my baby. :-).

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2014 3:33:00 PM

such a tender write about a loyal pet Brenda. I do hope you place well in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/17/2014 9:00:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan.