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ILU-2

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ILU-2

I LU

To love and make love
under, we build skies that don’t
pour or scald. Our seas
don’t wet, sands need no blanket.
Long live, surreally real love!

@18 jun 13
Form: Tanka
For Skat's contest.

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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Ahhh!!! Truly enjoyed this very unique and creative work today..Sara

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:18:00 PM
    a tempting dream...very romantic jaggy, good luck in the contest, it's certainly no 1 in my heart :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:19:00 AM
    Hi Jag great tanka, good luck in the contest, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:31:00 PM
    my goodness, jag... such poetic energy that fills me up; softly passionate ... greatt stuff!...:) huggs