I'Ll Laugh Myself To Sleep

My Mind is Music, in Music's Mind- Tunes are riddled with riddles and rhymes My thoughts wander in wonder, dancing in silly songs Melodies to haunt and please (Even if they only please me) Because I will laugh myself to sleep (I've nothing better to do) I'll laugh myself to sleep, just because Just because It's better than crying myself to sleep And the little things that blow my Mind- Little things that keep me from thinking... The Wind sounds like footsteps, Coming up the stairs On a cold Winter's night * I wrote this on LSD; don't know if it helped or not lol

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/24/2013 7:35:00 PM

Chan Why did you have to say the LSD part at the end. Now I have to call you a BAD BOY again and think of a punishment. LOL It was cute and creative. nice job Your comment on my web of lies poem is true. We need more honesty from others. Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 9:09:00 PM

Drugs have always been an intricate part of my creative process, for better or worse lol. This piece isn't very good but I just included it for a bit of variety. Thanks for the review, sweet pea! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2013 7:20:00 PM

It is a bit disjointed but has the potential to be more. I would suggest reworking it. The first two lines are excellent.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/22/2013 9:14:00 PM

See, this is why I shy away from this format. I'm just all wobbly, like a kid learning to ride a bike without training wheels; I'm all over the place (but perhaps that can be blamed on the acid lol). I'm just really uncomfortable with free-verse.