If I Were Your Love
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This is a bit exaggerated but true story of a woman who many years ago was my best friend, but she had a bad habit of contantly putting down her husband, who was a very good person and who was much nicer to his wife than I ever noticed other men being to their wives. In fact, he acted as if he worshipped her, so it made me kind of pissed that she acted so ungrateful. I did not have a crush on him like I say in this poem, but I DID envy her for the way she got treated like a queen. (I told her if she ever divorced and i was free, I'd go out searching for him. haha)
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I know your wife. She is my friend,
but also I know too
things behind your back she often
says to disparage you.
I see the way you gaze at her;
the way you touch her face.
You nickname her “My lovely queen,”
but it’s a disgrace.
She doesn’t see you as her “king.”
She hates that you are thin,
bald and unattractive too.
Her discontent’s a sin!
An ugly man you're not; in fact,
I see right through her lies.
You are so beautiful to me.
I think you are a prize.
I love the light you radiate.
No pretense do I see.
You treat all people with respect
and say kind words to me.
Not often do I see the type
of love that you display
after years of marriage and in
such a romantic way.
It makes me sad for you and me -
the things I see and hear.
For if you were my love, dear man,
my everything you’d be.
I’d hug you each time we parted,
and I would be remiss
if when you returned home, I would
not greet you with a kiss.
Oh, if someone looked at me with
utter sweet delight
and never frowned at things I did
if I’d not done them right.
You never say a cruel word
to make your wife feel worse.
Your wife confided that to me.
It’s worthy of sweet verse.
I cannot think of anything
that she can complain of.
I would more than thankful be
oh, if I were your love.
April 24, 2023
For If I Were Your Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2023
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