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If I were asked, my dear What in you I would like To change, My answer, emphatically, NOTHING, would be, Unchanged, I wish you To remain, FOR How could I dare interfere With your splendid being in Any way, When Our Lord, in HIS infinite wisdom, Has you, my love, So Perfectly MADE? ©Demetrios Trifiatis 15 February 2013

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Date: 2/15/2013 7:35:00 PM
Perfectly said....blessings
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/18/2013 3:56:00 AM
Thank you, Donna, you always generous!
Date: 2/15/2013 7:13:00 PM
I love this one Demetrios. You have said a great deal with an economy of words. I am sure your perfect one appreciated this splendid poem.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/18/2013 3:55:00 AM
Laconic wisdom was I taught by my forfathers. Ha-ha! Merci Richard!
Date: 2/15/2013 10:27:00 AM
A love poem to surpass all love poems! As Eileen said, a 10 out of 7!!! Cheers, Jack
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2013 10:34:00 AM
Thank you my fiend! May I write to ask you for some clarifications concerning the PS?
Date: 2/15/2013 5:50:00 AM
I have no words to describe the beauty of this poem! For once, I'm speechless!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2013 6:02:00 AM
Very kind and very generous!! We are always inspired by situations and people around us. Thank you!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/15/2013 5:50:00 AM
A 7 for I cannot give a 10.
Date: 2/15/2013 5:34:00 AM
As always, beautiful poetry. God don't make mistakes. Have a wonderful weekend. Lucilla
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2013 6:04:00 AM
Dear Lucilla, Yes, the LORD is perfect, any mistakes seen comes from our ignorance! Thank you!
Date: 2/15/2013 5:03:00 AM
This is truly Beautiful a grand tribute to Love! Lori
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2013 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Lori, may God bless you with such love!
Date: 2/15/2013 4:22:00 AM
- Just: - - GORGEOUS!!!!!! - - <3 - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2013 6:06:00 AM
Dear Anne Lise, You GORGEOUS!!! Have a marvelous weekend too!
Date: 2/15/2013 3:33:00 AM
True my dear Sir..fearfully and wonderfully made in the perfection of God's image...awesome piece you've penned there..anyone can relate to it..thanks :-)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/15/2013 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Sir, Yes, what we are is God's doing and that's perfect!

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