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If I Were a Tree...

If I were a tree, I would gander at thee, whose roots are all asunder. Your senses are weak, for although you can speak, my meaning is much less a blunder. Your eyes must be shut, for although you can strut, you only see to plunder. If only you knew, how lucky you few, whose roots are all asunder. If I were a tree, I would say unto thee, do not wish to be me. For all the world is yours to choose where to plant your roots.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/5/2015 9:59:00 PM
Aaron* I enjoyed reading this poem, Thank you for sharing. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:43:00 PM
Aaron, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:55:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 12/4/2008 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 9:28:00 PM
Aaron - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/31/2008 9:00:00 AM
Aaron, Congratulations on being featured as the words of your poem paint a clear image for your readers to capture through your creative writing style... MPK
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Date: 10/28/2008 4:41:00 PM
This was FANTASTIC!! Perfect form, rhythm and rhyme! Congratulations on your featured write :-) It's much deserved! Stacy
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:42:00 AM
Wonderful write here, Aaron. Some Native Americans call trees "standing people" and you have certainly captured that image for me. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week!
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 10/28/2008 8:31:00 AM
I love the inspiration of this poem...the creative use of nature/human nature. Congratulations on being featured! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 5:58:00 AM
Aaron congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations Aaron on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 10/28/2008 4:12:00 AM
Very impressive write, lots of beautiful creations in there! The last lines were fantastic. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/27/2008 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:57:00 PM
Interesting reflection in this poem. Creative! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations Aaron on a well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 9:08:00 AM
great poem ,great topic,
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Date: 8/10/2008 3:55:00 PM
great rhying , a beautiful piece, so warm and touching.
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