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If i lose you

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Below is the poem entitled If i lose you which was written by poet Godwins Piyo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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If i lose you

Softly sinking into the 
deep pit
Deep down the heartless 
heat
Falsely feeling the 
goblin's guilty
Dramatically doping my 
purity

Without you, where 
would i be?
Your handy hand helped 
me
Sincerely snatched me off 
death
And today true love i have

Pretty please leave me not
Life seriously sucks, untie 
not our knot
Purple pupils dressed in 
secondary uniforms
Look lovely holding hands 
after classrooms
Please pretty please, we 
no longer wear school 
uniforms

If i lose you
The first fruit of my poem
The first sad stanza 
Is how i truely feel
The true heartfelt answer

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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 4:25:00 AM
    I just love the way you transmit emotions in your poetry..well done

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/29/2013 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charmaine:)