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If I Had My Way

The sea calls my name; to the call of waves I respond For seven full days with no one I’ll correspond My fishing gear packed, I board a cabin cruiser To escape society, man’s worst abuser The GPS set, I head fifty miles offshore To a reef where city lights can’t be seen anymore The sea would remain calm; hey, this is my story And the galley’s pantry filled with inventory Gull screeches and dolphin cackles, the only sounds In each direction a blue horizon surrounds Since the break of dawn, the grouper have been biting Catching my dinner; nothing is more exciting As the orange sun paints clouds pink before it sets I commune with God and nature, have no regrets Through the skylight above the cabin’s comfy bed Venus, Mars and the Milky Way appear overhead Reminders that I’m but a speck in God’s grand plan Merely a traveler whose perceptions expand A lifetime I’d want, but settle for just one week To live upon the ocean and adventure seek * For Carol’s “A Week to Do as You Please” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 11:17:00 AM
I enjoyed this narrative so much, that when you ready, give me a call, I'll swear was never part of any society. Thanks for reading my poems, and just being who you are. One love
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:18:00 PM
OOOOH, this sounds like a place I want to go to, Carolyn. What great images you have given here with the dolphin cackles and the orange sun painting the clouds. Congrats on your well deserved #1 win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 10/29/2010 3:21:00 PM
Congrats, Carol. Awesome. Well deserved win. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:15:00 AM
wow excellent peace here thank you again
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Date: 10/28/2010 2:21:00 PM
wow, that sounds just perfect doesn't it, congrats on your first place win in the contest Carolyn
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Date: 10/28/2010 5:12:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on your win in Carol's contest.. Hope you are having a splendid week, love Wilma
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:15:00 AM
I commune with God& Nature, have no regrets.. gr8 line......... Congrats on notching 1st place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:53:00 PM
What a glorious week Carolyn. Love the picture you have painted. Many congratulations dear friend for this win.
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Date: 10/27/2010 4:56:00 PM
Boy! What a roll your on My deserving lady. Congratulations on a well deserved First place, my special friend. Enjoy the glory, it's time. Smile! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:25:00 PM
I think I read this one, CArolyn. It was a great winning poem!! Big congrats.LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 1:38:00 PM
Hi LNC..forget the tent..lets go sailing..your on a rol..congrats on your BIG win..BG
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Date: 10/27/2010 1:21:00 PM
Wow....this is a wonderful winning streak dear Carolyn...and so well deserved. another wonderful poem from you. I hope you get this week of your dreams!! Congratulations! love , Carrie
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Date: 10/27/2010 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations once more for the first plCE WIN, win after win- your muse quite active, Carolyn
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you Carolyn for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:59:00 PM
Hey Sis, thnx for reading and leaving comments on my writes. I always appreciate this. xJimmy
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Date: 10/9/2010 11:41:00 AM
Sea...for you; the timberlands for the likes of I ! What a great write Carolyn ! And...it's so nice to share change ! Much love, james
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Date: 10/6/2010 10:10:00 PM
Hey, if you need a cabin boy to help carry your gear, bait your hook, clean your fish, etc. I can be had for a decent fee. Of course, I haven't been confused for a "boy" for many a year. And, we don't even have to name the boat "Monkey Business" - we can name it "Platonic Pleasures". Ahoy there matey. Loved the write and the picture it paints. Enjoy your week at sea. Joe
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:00:00 PM
Donna Douglas, it islike a travel ogue in Technicolor. I am impressed. Nice realization! Regards and love from Gerard.
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:29:00 PM
What a beauty and how wonderful it feels to be here again with the friends i love!tmfvs!
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:43:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, wonderful poem, enjoyed the read. Yes, being alone out of sea must be a great adventure. Hope you are having a nice time with your Tallahassee friends!...And thank you for your friendly comments! All the best and take care!...Love, Gert
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Date: 10/2/2010 8:53:00 PM
That sounds like a beautiful relaxing week. Good luck in Carol's contest. Love Phyl
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Date: 10/2/2010 1:07:00 PM
very nice good luck in the contest and thanks for all your kind comments have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:51:00 AM
Sound like an enjoyable time Carolyn! One of which I would delight in myself. Maybe you be but a speck in the vastness of the master plan, bur no less important in the body of love's completeness. "Beautiful Job" Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:18:00 AM
maybe thats what i need. john
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Date: 10/2/2010 1:18:00 AM
This one is really great, Carolyn. You have created so much imagery throughout the poem. As the reader moves through this poem, many vivid images such as, "... orange sun paints clouds pink..." Thus, the read brings a smile and feelings of peace. I enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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