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If I Could

If I could turn back time to be with you There’s not a single thing I would not do I’d risk my life and challenge every fate To taste your kiss and my desires sate If I could once more look into your eyes I’d lose myself and let my passion rise Your lips I’d wet with tongue and dip inside And then right down your neck I’d let it slide I’d press myself to you and let you feel The curves and softness that I’d soon reveal Your hands I’d kiss and let them move at will My only wish to grant you every thrill I’d then undress my body and my soul Seductive mistress, wise in her control Your eyes would close as fantasies would wake My hair you'd pull and tangle as you quake I'd keep you on the edge, begging for more You'd turn to me with eyes that do implore A smile of mischief there you’d see displayed For I’d prolong your torment in my raid I'd plunder all of you and then I’d sigh You’d see the gleam of triumph in my eye And then I’d let you strive for sweet release Your need for manly claim I would appease I’d feel your thunder deep inside of me The rumbling drive that leads to ecstasy My nails would leave a trail of token flame An unleashed storm of passion so untame And for a time we’d yield to primal need As hunger pangs of soul with love we’d feed Your breath upon my ear would bring a cry Two bodies that have soared up to the sky If I could turn back time to be with you There is not single thing I would not do I’d risk my life and challenge every fate To taste your kiss and my desires sate

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Date: 10/5/2014 10:58:00 PM
Just read this one and my wife is fast asleep , can not be woke up because she has a 12 hour shift tomorrow at the hospital. A cold shower will be my next stop!! Your rock the socks and move the groove, send up flames to melt a snow covered mountain top ! Super 7 given my friend, deserves a solid 10 methinks.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2014 1:16:00 PM
;) You have me smiling....I would never mind being woken up for that! This is such a lovely post, Robert. I do thank you. It makes me feel that I've written my poem well. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I read your sizzler with Kathryn...It was great!
Date: 10/5/2014 1:55:00 AM
Im on the edge of your wild raid, nail trail your name be laid, plunder pushed to you, my thunder flash fires true. I love this lust of dream alive! Unbearable beauty, unparalled kiss, and your rhyming is kiss to the cream of your mischief Eileen."Your hands I'd kiss and let them move at will, my only wish to grant you every thrill.." Your romance reigns supreme! A FAV. Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/5/2014 2:05:00 AM
Justin, your visit is welcome....as is your sweet words of commendation and praise. I'm glad you liked this sensual piece. This union on bodies is rhythmic, is it not? It has its own tempo and rhyme and hence the rhyming of the poem. To reign supreme is, indeed, sweet. Thank you for lifting up my spirits.
Date: 10/4/2014 8:04:00 PM
An ooh la la piece. You are on a roll Eileen. Crazy busy day, started at 6 and just getting home. Now I am off for 10 days hooray! Heading to Vancouver to meet up with my sister and he'd new boyfriend. I will try to keep in touch while I'm away. Take care and a big hug!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/5/2014 2:07:00 AM
Yes...Ohh la la. Practicing for one of the contests, Richard. You should join. There is a contest going on seduction. Fascinating topic. I'm glad you have some time off to meet up with your sister. I know it's hard to be in touch when away....Do what you can. Have a great time. Hugs
Date: 10/4/2014 12:22:00 PM
Very sensuous to the point of being near x-rated. Got my thoughts and images front and center as I read this with much delight. Ahhh . . . ahhh . . . turning back the time is a much revered request, and it would be all that you purport it to be. For awhile. A short while, before all the hateful words which passed between you and he begin to resurface. Then you're along. Again. But you have some dynamite memories to relive. Love this poem.
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Date: 10/4/2014 11:16:00 AM
This is a another sizzling beauty. If l could...if l could snatch away this delightful poem and crown it mine, Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2014 11:21:00 AM
:) This is a very sweet post, Ndaba. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece enough to crown it. Thanks for passing by...
Date: 10/4/2014 10:39:00 AM
Very sensuous to the point of being near x-rated. Got my thoughts and images front and center as I read this with much delight. Ahhh . . . ahhh . . . turning back the time is a much revered request, and it would be all that you purport it to be. For awhile. A short while, before all the hateful words which passed between you and he begin to resurface. Then you're along. Again. But you have some dynamite memories to relive. Love this poem.
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/4/2014 12:24:00 PM
Sorry about the double comment. I'm sorry I missed your comment also.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2014 10:46:00 AM
About that X-rated bit...you obviously haven't read too many poems here. This is mild....really mild.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2014 10:45:00 AM
Jerry...thanks for your thoughts and take on this. You've only read two of my poems this far. Sometimes we read into a poem what we think is there. It could be true, it could not be true...Words are all we have to go by. BTW....I'm sorry you didn't get the chance to read my comment to you on my previous poem as I deleted it. I guess that it would cause too much of a raucous. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/4/2014 3:03:00 AM
excellent piece of writing eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2014 11:21:00 AM
Liam...thank you for your lovely post on my poem...If I Could. It is always a joy to have your visits.
Date: 10/4/2014 2:20:00 AM
Thanks God I peeped again.So so.passionate this is dear Eileen.Wow!!!Sizzle sizzle: )Smile
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2014 2:12:00 PM
Glad you passed by my work again, my dear.
Date: 10/4/2014 1:32:00 AM
You have set the whole poetrysoup on fire with desire! Please, someone to close the windows and shut the doors! What a Vesuvius of sensuality and temptation! Have mercy dear Eileen " AND LEAD US NOT INTO TEMPTATION BUT...." I have enjoyed the poem in the superlative degree! Fortunately I am a good, Christian and married! Eileen, I name you the ALPHA and OMEGA of Romanticism! A seven!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2014 11:20:00 AM
You have written an interesting post, my dear poet. I am delighted that you have named me the Alpha and Omega of romanticism. A noble title, indeed. I thank you kindly!
Date: 10/3/2014 11:22:00 PM
wow, Eileen. You have to be the most sensuous female poetess at Soup. Did you grow up on Harlequin romances? hahaha. I loved reading those as a teen. They taught me all I know today (JK)!!! You rock, lady.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/3/2014 11:31:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, and no...I did not grow up on Harlequin romances....I've read very few novels in my life. I do enjoy the classics and I've read those multiple times...Jane Eyre...Pride and prejudice. I'm just a sensuous female. I've come to grips with that reality and at times I wish it weren't so...it is what it. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/3/2014 9:41:00 PM
I need to go...ummm....open the window...so sensuous...hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/3/2014 11:32:00 PM
Tim....bear the heat....It will do you good.
Date: 10/3/2014 9:20:00 PM
Olala. You wrote this poem so descriptive that I felt like I was invading your privacy. I have to go turn on my fan. Wow Eileen what a beautiful poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/3/2014 9:22:00 PM
:) Thanks, Brenda...I'm practicing for the Seductive Contest! ;) I might just enter an older write....I have plenty of those too. Glad you liked it dear. Hugs

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