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If I were a ballerina, as graceful as a swimming swan, I would joyously pirouette before You, my God, my audience of one. But I am not a ballerina, I am clumsy and inept, but You, my God, still bid me dance, and You applaud my every step. If I had the voice of an angel, if I could sing with purest tone, I would sing a song of worship, while kneeling at your throne. But I am but a clanging cymbal, my voice harsh, not fit to sing, but You, my God, still bid me come, and sing my song, an offering. If I were the greatest poet, with words of golden rhyme, I would write the perfect sonnet, to honor You for all time. But I am not a famous wordsmith, my poems simple and mundane, but, You, my God, are my inspiration, let the words I write, Your praise contain. Let everything I do be for Your glory. May my life not be a sham. I can be all You want me to be, 'cause You accept me as I am. 7/3/15

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Date: 8/12/2015 2:04:00 AM
Hi Kim...I read your poem late last night and again this morning. What a powerful write, what humility and honestly. This is going up on my office wall...have a blessed day (:heers, Tbang
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:57:00 AM
G'day Kim... a nicely written poem Kim that reflects on acceptance for who you are - Lindsay
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/11/2015 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay! I appreciate your comment.
Date: 8/1/2015 10:17:00 AM
Very good. I really like the humility this poem displays. Much how I myself feel.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2015 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Vaughn! I appreciate you stopping by and commenting.
Date: 7/27/2015 7:52:00 PM
Kim, I love how you described your voice" I am but a clanging cymbal, my voice harsh" and is the last stanza. Hugs Eve
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2015 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Eve! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 7/27/2015 5:05:00 PM
Kim, you went above and beyond on this. Great job.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2015 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, James! I appreciate your encouraging comment!
Date: 7/25/2015 11:38:00 PM
Brilliant poem , great message and fantastic flow and spirit! A7
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:32:00 PM
thanks so much for your acrostic contest, Kim. Clicked around and could not find a poem of yours to comment to fresh!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:25:00 PM
You are most welcome, Andrea!
Date: 7/22/2015 6:47:00 AM
A thoughtful and beautiful tribute. It matters not who we are, he accepts us, if we accept him. Thanks
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, Franklin! I have to remind myself of that frequently!
Date: 7/21/2015 7:42:00 AM
Kim, infrequently we see a poem that has real lasting qualities. You have reached that level in your "If" poem. Congrats. I hesitate to show mine by the same title, but since it is short, here goes: “IF”. By James E. Tate Antidisestablishmentarianism, Webster handled with ease. Words like these he thought were a breeze. A renowned lexicographer, there is no doubt, But, the world’s biggest word, Webster left out. In only two letters of unused space He crowded the big word, “IF” in disgrace!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:20:00 PM
James, thank you for encouraging comment. I enjoyed reading your poem of the same title. For being only 2 letters long, "if" holds a lot of possibilities.
Date: 7/19/2015 12:40:00 AM
Kim, this is beyond beautiful, it is heavenly and God hears it up above , a very moving 7 and thanks so much for my placement in your waltzing contest, I am so honored
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 5:13:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! I always appreciate your encouraging comments!
Date: 7/10/2015 10:09:00 PM
wow, Kim, here is one of yours that I had missed and it's very inspirational and contains such a sincere sweet message of love for God. Very nice.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 7/8/2015 2:43:00 PM
I love your thoughts on this inspirational poem and what you say I to feel . God is good . A great message Kim. love phyl
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, Phyllis! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: 7/5/2015 2:55:00 PM
You may think your poems simple and mundane, Kim. This one is anything but. Nice.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thank you, Cona, for your kind remarks!
Date: 7/4/2015 8:50:00 AM
Such lovely offering Kim. Love the heart from which these verses came from. hugs!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! So sweet of you.
Date: 7/3/2015 5:50:00 PM
This is lovely and inspiring, Kim! He accepts us as we are; we should also accept our neighbours as they are. #7 // paul
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 4:42:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! You are right: we need to accept people as they are, because He accepts us as we are.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:32:00 PM
What a fitting gift for the One and Only, Kim. Whatsoever things are lovely....(and all the rest of it) think of these things. You are doing this with this wonderful poem. Lovely.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen for such an encouraging comment.

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