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If the world were filled with angelic souls With inspired insight and matching goals There would be peace, not appalling wars Only bountiful serenity for me and yours Famine and strife would cease to exist Plans to feed the world we'd all enlist Violence and murder would be no more Anger dealt with swiftly we'd all strive for Unheard of would be prejudice against another's race Everyone warmly welcomed anywhere into any place No more long hours at a job that makes one cringe inside Encouraged to be in a career that makes one smile with pride Our children would never feel unloved and unwanted Abundance of hugs and sweet kisses would be flaunted Marriages would thrive and not end in divorce Being with our true soul mates we'd all endorse Jealousies, insecurities and hatred would be wiped out Contentment and confidence would be what we're about If we all collaborate to make our world a better place Happiness and tranquility will be ours to embrace 03/14/2014

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Date: 7/18/2014 8:19:00 AM
Ohhh, Cecilia ~ Such lovely sentiments by a truly gorgeous lady with a most beautiful heart. Your skills produce some smooooth lines and flow to set our hearts and minds aglow to let us know we love you so. Smiles 'n hugs, Milady, for making the world such a better place to be … love from me! ~ Richard x0x :)
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:36:00 PM
wonderful words, Cecilia, I enjoyed every line....Linda
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:15:00 PM
CECILIA, , Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you:). ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/6/2014 12:42:00 PM
I remember this one. Such a well thought out poem. Congrats on your win.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/7/2014 10:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea xo
Date: 4/6/2014 12:03:00 PM
These words are so meaningful, and could rightly be written to our world at large, or to our own small Poetry world....To embrace tranquility is a sacred thing. Lovely piece, Cecilia. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 4/6/2014 10:06:00 AM
Lovely thoughts in a beautiful creation Cecilia !! was a winner all the way:) congrats. // paul
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Date: 4/6/2014 2:18:00 AM
You've written it well. A very brilliant contributions! Big congrats on your accolades!!
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Date: 4/5/2014 11:51:00 PM
This is extremely amazing! Congratulations on your well-deserved great win my dear friend Cecilia. I like your poem so much! Thank u so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/7/2014 6:20:00 PM
Thanks so much for the endearing comment Leonora xo
Date: 4/5/2014 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, cecilia
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Date: 4/5/2014 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia for a lovely entry. Congrats....Seren
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Date: 3/17/2014 7:01:00 PM
if if if only!!!! Lovely thoughts!!
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Date: 3/16/2014 2:43:00 PM
- You describe a beautiful world - a world that was a pleasure to live in, Cecilia!! - A beautiful poem. - Good luck in the contest - hope you win ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/16/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise xo
Date: 3/16/2014 11:09:00 AM
That's a pretty big word isn't it? You expounded on it with such ebb and flow of emotions. Peace. :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/16/2014 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Robert, peace to you as well.
Date: 3/16/2014 8:07:00 AM
IF my dear, IF! Captivating, inspiring, hopeful! You have captured all dreams and aspirations of humanity. If all this take place heaven will exchange place with earth! How lovely will it be! Let us start with ourselves first, for if the part doesn't change the whole will remain the same! Excellent poem! All my poems pivot around the themes you mention here Dearest Cecilia!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/16/2014 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Demetrios.....heaven on earth sounds wonderful. Hugs
Date: 3/15/2014 4:59:00 PM
I just lovwed this poem. It would be great if all this could happen. We would all be happy then. Thaks for sharing... Lucilla
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/16/2014 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla, when I dream I dream big, lol. Hugs
Date: 3/15/2014 2:02:00 PM
Thanks for considering my suggestion, hugs Rick
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Date: 3/15/2014 11:10:00 AM
Contentment and confidence would be what we're about. Just a thought so you don't rhyme out with out. This is an exceptional piece, you brought me to an ideal world and I loved it.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/15/2014 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Rick, I appreciate your feedback and you. Hugs
Date: 3/14/2014 11:15:00 PM
You did a marvelous job at rhyming each couplet very well.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/15/2014 11:55:00 AM
Thanks Robert

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