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ice king

wrapped in furs
a king skis to  battle - -
enemies shiver

Jack Horne For Skat’s Ice King contest

The ice cube was almost painful to hold, until my hand felt numb

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:56:00 PM
    very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Jack, great win in Skat’s contest on this interesting challenge!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Now heres a poem that I can read and enjoy..congrats on your win...BG

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:06:00 PM
    well done Jack Congrats

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Hi Jack, my friend, love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA .

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:11:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:59:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS , JACK ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:06:00 AM
    you da bomb on this one my friend great imagery and knowing you you did melt it with brillance will have to check this contest out but this should do very well thanks for nice comment to on my cap contest will check that one out too for ya thanks for sharing and keep on writting enjoyed

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 8:26:00 PM
    : ): ) A fantastic picture painted with your words, my friend! And those skis were most likely made of wood and their footwear came from animal skins! x Annalise

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 9:16:00 PM
    This is interesting. I have never heard of a king on skies before. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Best Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 8:33:00 PM
    Had me smiling picturing this king on skies as he goes off to battle. At least he is warm in his furs. LOL Cute haiku. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:11:00 PM
    I love that last line!!!

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Clever writing, my friend....This is one reason I chose not to enter...Jake

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 9:07:00 AM
    What a sight - all that blood staining the snow white snow, the ice king wielding his saber. Great image. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:02:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visits to my work..It was delightful to have you there..Sara

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 5:28:00 AM
    Wow, this is a most impressive Haiku my friend, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! I just loved this incredibly wondrous poem here Jack, such a awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:10:00 AM
    - Nice one,Jack ! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:36:00 AM
    nice poem gl in contest Shadows x smiles

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:36:00 AM
    yes, you had the same experience as I did with that ice cube. so tell me, how long did YOU hold it, Jack. Even in hot sun, mine took twenty min. to melt. I think you have a very clever haiku.