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Ice King

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Ice King

in my frozen hand
the melting ice is burning
as it quickly melts
  the warm puddle on the walk
  reflects the hot August sun

I'll tell ya that ice is "King" in this weather!
Craig Cornish

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:08:00 AM
    Congrats on your great win with this unique work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:54:00 PM
    The warm puddle reflects the change of season..Welcome to summer as We wave goodbye to the ice king..which brings pain..How did i miss this one.I love your creative writing.Am waiting your new..and tnks for your comment re the painting of the two skiers.and their silhouettes..I can picture that"!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:34:00 PM
    Wonderful..I would have placed it MUCH higher...BG

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:07:00 PM
    I like the added humor, congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:56:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:17:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Craig! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:02:00 PM
    CRAIG, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:20:00 PM
    very nice write Craig ;}

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:41:00 AM
    our summer was very mild this year.

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:29:00 AM
    Great write from your pen as always. I can just feel the ache with the ice... not sure what part of the globe you inhabit, but here in S/Africa we are in the final months of a freezing, rainy season. Bring on the summer :)

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 8:34:00 AM
    Wow you must be having some extreme heat, in the land down under it is cold, love that comment ice is king enjoyed this little poem, les sings sueellen

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:13:00 AM
    Great short poem craig, best of luck for the contest *smiles*