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I Wish You Well For the Best Rondeau Competition

I wish you well and hope all's fine, but long to hear you are still mine; I thought I'd found a love with you and that, like me, you would be true: my dreams were sadly asanine. I floated blissful on cloud nine, with happy shivers down my spine, but now I feel alone and blue. I wish you well. I'd ask if we could wine and dine, but know you'd, cold as ice, decline; I prayed you'd say we were not through, but yes, it's time to say adieu: no point in waiting for a sign. I wish you well. Written 10th July for Laura Loo's Rondeau contest

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Date: 7/30/2016 7:03:00 PM
hey, did this contest ever get judged? I am so clueless right now!
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:33:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Jack. Enjoyed reading this poem. love phyl
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:00:00 AM
Great read mate. Love that ...cold as ice... line. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/10/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thank you Jack for always reading and commenting. This entry should do really well in the contest. I haven't tried this one yet. The fourth and my birthday have kept me so busy that I haven't been on the Soup much. Have to go look at the contests. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:43:00 PM
Oh, Jack, is it your first and only one? Such a sweet one you did! Hey, thanks for seeing so many of my poems. I am on here probably for my last time for a few days. We shall see how I feel Tuesday. Thanks for being such a great friend!!
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:29:00 PM
Brilliantly written jack i wrote my first rondeau for the contest I really like the style of the form:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:15:00 PM
Very gentlemanly from your side, Jack; time to read the writing on the wall and call it a day:) gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:15:00 PM
excellent poetry Jack, love this.
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Date: 7/10/2016 4:31:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Plenty of fodder out there to get a work like this one..Thanks for all the visits to my pages..Sara
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