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I Wish To Be

I wish to be the gentle breeze Sweeping tearful eyes Of the weary midday flower. Or to be the horrid shadow Casting fearful darkness For a passer-by to rest. A rippling river of white I wish to be the one Drenching thirst of arid earth. Or to be a dancing wave Of the mighty sea Playing with a child. A guild of fleeting clouds Hiding splendid sun For a homeless soul, Or the canopy of green Thwarting rain for a home, I wish to be the one. I wish to be a cresset Guiding glimpse of hope In the prosaic paths of pangs Or to be a firefly In the dim toilsome journey Of a soul to his divine home.

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Date: 1/21/2021 2:55:00 PM
Charming poem, Jenish. I was delighted to see it published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 8/6/2020 9:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the poem. It is an interesting piece of work. Keep it up.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/8/2020 9:38:00 PM
Thank you Lekau for your delightful comment..
Date: 7/28/2020 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful, best I have read in recent times.It reflects your beautiful personality. Am adding it to my favourites.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 9:40:00 PM
Thank you Rama for your delightful words..You made my day..
Date: 7/14/2020 2:11:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Jenish. Blessings! :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/14/2020 11:37:00 PM
Thank you Aditi..
Date: 7/13/2020 10:00:00 PM
A lovely wish for compassion from a heart that sees the suffering of those around it, Jenish. Congratulations on your win my friend!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/13/2020 11:49:00 PM
Thank you Sam for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/12/2020 11:48:00 PM
Two-word comment, my friend: HUGE FAVE! Thanks! ~ Gershon Just divinely penned. Love, love, love it!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/13/2020 12:34:00 AM
Thank you Gershon for the FAVE.. You made my day...
Date: 7/10/2020 11:26:00 PM
Enchanting, Jenish! These words speak of a compassionate heart. Congratulations on your win ~ John
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/11/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you John for your kind support..
Date: 7/10/2020 7:15:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/11/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Brenda..
Date: 7/10/2020 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place with this wondrous, captivating write, Jenish:-) There's something magical about it!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/11/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Edward for your delightful words.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/9/2020 8:40:00 AM
Really loved this Jenish. Panagiota xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota..
Date: 7/9/2020 6:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Jenish--and awesome sentiments!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 7/9/2020 5:15:00 AM
I wish to read such beautiful and uplifting poems every day my dearest friend, Jenish! Outstanding! Blessings!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words..
Date: 7/9/2020 3:06:00 AM
Every words drenches me in tender velvet kindness Jenish. So reflective of your thoughts. Loved it :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 3:40:00 AM
Thank you Aditi for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/9/2020 1:13:00 AM
I wish to be a Poet that can write Poetry like that....... And shine like a cresset .... Thank you, Jenish, very lovely verse...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/9/2020 1:20:00 AM
You made my day Shirley.. Thank you and God bless you..

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