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I Wish That I Were

I wish that I were your lover We'd keep it all undercover with kisses to tease and nibbles to please Your pleasure spots I'd discover I'd fill your life with such pleasure be sure that I am a treasure So give in to me Lay back and just be Let passion flow without measure Eileen Manassian Not for Contest Didn't read the rules first!

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2018 5:17:00 PM

A double fun limerick, Eileen. I was looking for congrats, till I noticed your note. Enjoyed both offerings, though I have a soft spot for the first one. Hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/7/2018 2:22:00 AM

Hi Eileen, I enjoyed your string of limericks from start to finish. I agree with Andrea, I a human can definitely be a beast. Well done:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/6/2018 5:00:00 AM

I will give in to be your spiritual lover dearest, Eileen! Wonderful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2018 8:14:00 PM

well, I guess a human can be a creature!!! LIke beauty and the beast!! Love this, Eileen. You rock!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/6/2018 3:05:00 AM

HA HA...Yes, a beast in bed. You are a wise one dear. Thanks for the visit.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/4/2018 8:18:00 AM

The limerick will never be the same again. ;0)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2018 10:12:00 AM

You think? ;) Thanks, dear....Hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2018 7:10:00 AM

Your Limerick-Ability is showing; and it is marvelous!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2018 10:11:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I appreciate your visit.

Fj Thomas

Date: 5/4/2018 7:08:00 AM

Very beautiful Eilee. Very :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2018 10:10:00 AM

Awwwww...love ya! :) Thanks for the visit, dear. Hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/4/2018 3:46:00 AM

A free loving write...really nice...All the best...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/4/2018 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, dear. I appreciate the visit. I didn't read the instructions for the contest before I wrote it....I can't enter it, but it was fun to write.