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I Will Make You Remember Me

Do not stay too long in the mirror I will descend in your memory Do not stay too long under shower In tactile filigrees you’Il remember me Do not stay too long in the mirror To stop the raindrops is very hard To stop the plip plop is very hard I will come out as your bard I know you will let your guard down I will be your bard in the drizzle Do not stand at the Jasmine window At the window sill your hair I will blow Do not stay too long at the window In the north wind I will be the snow You'll madden yourself for the flakes To stop the pink surge is very hard To stop the fountain is very hard I will be there as your bard I know you will let your guard down In the surge I will be your bard One day the rain drenched you and me Do not go out in rains toward the sea I will make you think of me madly I will be with you in huddled love spree Together we will walk toward the sea To stop the past rose from coming is hard I know you will never forget your bard To stop the fragrant shadows is very hard I know you will let your guard down To stop the past rose from coming is hard Do not stay too long in the mirror ________________________________________ 3/1/2016

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Date: 11/4/2016 1:15:00 AM
U WROTE IT VERY WELL DADU ....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/4/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/3/2016 8:32:00 PM
THis is so poetic in its imagery, Probir. I really like it! Awesome!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/3/2016 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 11/3/2016 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful lyrical poem, Probir. It had my heart swaying to the beat of the wonderful words. I love this poem, it is so so romantic. But hey, I'm a Romantic Warrior, what's not to like about this poem, eh. Excellent write. Love always, my friend. RW
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/3/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thank you, RW ... your comments are so generous ...
Date: 11/3/2016 8:58:00 AM
Really nice song lyrics, Probir. Just needs a catchy tune:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/3/2016 12:20:00 PM
Thank you , Daniel ...
Date: 11/3/2016 6:51:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous lyrics my friend, Probir that convey the passion of your heart!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/3/2016 12:21:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/3/2016 5:10:00 AM
Beautiful lyrics of multi layered emotions.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/3/2016 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Paloma ...
Date: 11/3/2016 4:53:00 AM
wow !!! awesome !!! lovely imagery dear Probir, lot of feelings embedded, enjoyed it!//love,Anu:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/3/2016 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, Anu ...

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