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I Want U...

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I Want U...

I want to walk with you down the lane 
And I want to dance with you in rain

I want to feel your body against mine
And I want to run my fingers through your hair

I want to brush my lips against yours
And I want to melt in each others arms

I want to hold you in tight
And I just want you like crazy

I felt a chill running down my spine
And I had this feeling welling several times

I always dismissed it saying not right
And now don’t know why am I letting it through

I don’t know if it’s right or wrong
But yes this is what I want from you…

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  1. Date: 6/22/2010 3:57:00 AM
    Hello Heather and Carol... Thank you soo much for your feedbacks and a lovely welcome... Best Regards, Pravallika

  1. Date: 6/21/2010 5:07:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Pravallika. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2010 8:22:00 PM
    This is a very good poem I like it. It shows how much you love and care for the girl :) Good job keep on writing ~!~Heather~!~