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I want to see that look That shows the coming rapture The face of wanton need Passion's hungry capture I want to see that look Testament to lover's game To know it’s all my doing unleashing the untame I want to see that look Of sheer helpless submission Knowing that your release Is timed to my discretion I want to see that look Euphoria’s induction That plea for more and more A primal need production I want to see that look In hungry naked eyes And hear those trembling lips Supplicate, moan and sigh I want to see that look Before you’re blown away Exquisite ecstasy triumph The signature seductress way I want to see that look I WANT to see THAT look Then I can taste my pleasure For giving you satisfaction Brings mine on beyond measure Eileen

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 1/27/2015 8:45:00 PM

One bold and beautiful beast

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2015 12:41:00 AM

Well, I'm not quite sure what to make of that last word in your post. ? Thanks for reading.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/27/2015 12:50:00 PM

A very satisfying, seductive poem! "Exquisite ecstasy triumph The signature seductress way" Powerful lines throughout; love those lines!"For giving you satisfaction Brings mine on beyond measure".. this really brings one into a seducer's mind... there is a burning need to satisfy...an intense need to dominate. Fascinating, riveting work! Intrigued yet again! Always,Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 1:11:00 PM

It's interesting how you chose the word seducer, Laura. I'm not sure how that came into the picture...This could be said of any relationship. Seduction has its place in a secure relationship as well...in role playing. Thanks for the visit.

David Meade

Date: 1/27/2015 8:31:00 AM

Ah, this is a deep love. When two join flesh they are still two individuals but when eyes meet the connection merges two bodies into one, souls touch in the secret place and for brief moment that hints of eternity -- paradise. Rarely do you get to experience this outside the act itself . . . but this morning I was the lover and bright was the sun shinning in paradise! 7 Powerful Little One.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:32:00 AM

David...what a superb post. Those last two lines are riveting. I'm glad my poem effected you that way... Thanks...Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2015 8:13:00 AM

The writing on the picture makes a perfect introduction to this excellent seductive poem. I believe that the secret lies in the mind...there are to be found the strings that control the emotions leading up to passionate release. You have the benefit of knowing full well what you're talking about...and you set out to attain it. hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:33:00 AM

Paul...I have almost as much fun looking for the pictures as I do writing the poems... ;) Another obsession of mine....I already have one saved up for...you know! ;) Thanks for the visit...We can't always attain what we want....but we can die trying.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2015 8:03:00 AM

Is this what they mean by "Mind F__k". *lol* As always Eileen ooh la la licious!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:35:00 AM

Oh? I've haven't heard that expression...Hmmmmm...interesting, Mr Lamoureux. Ooh la la licious....LOVE LOVE LOVE that. Hugs

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/27/2015 7:28:00 AM

Its so hot in here.... a very sensual poem and well written... lov n hugs,nad! #7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:35:00 AM

I like to turn up the heat, Nadiya. Thanks for the visit, dear.

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/27/2015 7:22:00 AM

Nice! That look that says mission accomplished! Well said!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:36:00 AM

It is almost more pleasurable than being pleasured...almost! ;)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/27/2015 5:22:00 AM

Any relationship must be multileveled one, starting with the carnal and ending with the sublime! If it only focuses on one level the relationship is doomed after a little while! As far as sensuality is concerned this poem is the epitome of it and a seven is due, dear Eileen!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/27/2015 10:55:00 AM

Very eloquent reply, dear Eileen! Should I conclude that in matters of LOVE the emphasis should be put on carnal gratification and exclude other important issues as mind, spirit, respect, admiration and caring? By the same token should I conclude that old people, unable to gratify their sensuality are the unhappiest of mortals and have no option but to separate? I am certain you do not insinuate something like that in the least, on the contrary I hope you would agree when I say that only when carnal desires die out then and only then we can clearly see if a couple truly love one-another!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:30:00 AM

Yes...even if the other sides of a relationship are prospering, but the carnal isn't...the same thing happens. Where to put the emphasis? It depends on what matters. Studies have shown...for instance...that the health of the state of someone's marriage is gauged by the frequency of their physical union...Not only by that...however, it is a indication. If you do not want to make love to your partner...then intimacy and other issues are obviously at stake. My dear poet...Thank you for your comments. There may be more to life than this...I'm certain; however, without it...life has no meaning, either. Hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/27/2015 8:12:00 AM

I do entirely agree with you Demetrios. You have truly said "Any relationship must be multileveled one". We forget this basic thing and get hurt.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/27/2015 5:02:00 AM

At the height of sensuality..ecstasy...rapture..wanton need.. hungry capture..unleashing the untame... helpless submission... signature seductress...wow Wondera god-given power..Love>rajat

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:31:00 AM

Thanks, Rajat! You always make me smile. That is a great gift.

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/27/2015 3:34:00 AM

what a peice of writing so steamy so hot. I do not think i have ever heard the act of love making described as well as this write. It is so erotic, such ecstasy. a 7 from me and into favourites. it is a masterpeice. love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 10:03:00 AM

I love writing in this genre....Oh me oh my! Such is life. Thanks for the visit, Shane. I'm happy to have you here on my page.