Home » Poems » Jan Allison » I See the Moon

Jan Allison | + Follow Poet |

I See the Moon

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Jan Allison.

dropping his trousers ‘full moon’ is on view to all … too much alcohol 15th April 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Lizzy Love

Date: 4/20/2015 7:11:00 PM

Made me giggle, enjoyed! TY!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thanks Lizzy:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 4/18/2015 10:28:00 AM

My first viewing of a humorous Senyru Jan. Lovely chuckle this Saturday afternoon, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2015 12:16:00 PM

My first attempt at a funny one too:-) Hugs jan xx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/18/2015 3:40:00 AM

Why did I not see that one coming! Hilarious senryu!!! XD Always, Laura

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2015 6:17:00 AM

LOL Laura - I have never tried a humourous senyru before and I am loving the reaction it has received lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/17/2015 7:59:00 PM

I take that back maybe she means a bum or something else I am not seeing. I feel pretty stupid right now!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2015 11:59:00 PM

;-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/17/2015 7:57:00 PM

Does she mean boobs????

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2015 11:58:00 PM

Behave! Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/17/2015 6:37:00 PM

Very charming, great write Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thank you my friend - I was truly shocked by Andrea's comment ... and we thought butter wouldn't melt NOW we know different!:-) Love and hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/17/2015 4:24:00 PM

Love it Jan. I want to see that full moon above those trousers. lol love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2015 4:31:00 PM

Ha ha ha Phyllis! Hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2015 7:49:00 AM

Jan, I so admire your humour, you find the funny in everything, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my very looooong poem, the story of my life, I used every character allowed, lol

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2015 7:58:00 AM

I try and write with humour no matter my personal circumstances :-) Hugs jan xx

Jenny Brewer

Date: 4/16/2015 6:18:00 PM

Hi Jan, Hilarious hun,( I see a bad moon arising,lol xx)Our buddy will love it . xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 6:24:00 PM

I hope he sees it one day Jenny lol - great minds - I did title it bad moon rising but got no reads so changed it lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edwin Hofert

Date: 4/16/2015 4:30:00 PM

LOL Hilarious!!! Thanks. I needed that! 7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 4:31:00 PM

Not everyone appreciates my humour Edwin - I'm so glad I made you smile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2015 11:32:00 AM

- Thanks for all the smiles you share, dear friend Jan !!! - Love it !!! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise - even during the bad times we still need to smile:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/16/2015 8:45:00 AM

As usual you have managed to capture humor and weave it into a poem that is easy to relate to and understand. Good work, this ranks as one of your best efforts. Emile. #7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thanks Emile - you comment made me smile - one day I cooked a beautiful meal my hubby said 'this is one of your better efforts' i nearly hit him with the saucepan! hee hee :-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/16/2015 8:36:00 AM

To answer the question... "Is nothing sacred on The Soup?" Answer: NO! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 8:39:00 AM

Not when we are around Jack !!!!! - and why not bring a smile to someone's day - life is all too short!:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/16/2015 3:32:00 AM

Nice and interesting write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Ravi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 4/15/2015 6:59:00 PM

A week ago Eileen changed my persective on drinking a quiet cup of coffee and now between you and Andrea i am sure i will view moon rise in a new light forevermore. Is nothing sacred on soup? Just love it Jan. Another 7 my friend. love Shane xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2015 3:19:00 AM

I am seeing Andrea in a new light - i saw a pic of the moon rising - now I tilt my head over and giggle when I get a comment. Hugs Jan xx

Tasha Taylor

Date: 4/15/2015 6:22:00 PM

Lol! Thats hilarious! :) <3 Tash

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 6:24:00 PM

Thanks Tasha:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/15/2015 4:54:00 PM

lol...I saw Andrea's comment...priceless Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 4:56:00 PM

I was shocked to read that from Andrea! lol - Andrea is amazing and a wonderful asset to soup:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/15/2015 4:17:00 PM

Oh dear my friend... this is too funny. Who needs limerick when you can do this with haiku...LOL ~Janet

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 4:21:00 PM

Odd what springs into mind isn't it - well knowing me its not odd : lol I wrote the bus on Monday morning lol :-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2015 2:26:00 PM

haha, and if you look at the picture sideways...... the meaning is more obvious.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 4:57:00 PM

I keep turning my head to the left every time I get a comment now LOL:-) hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 2:28:00 PM

ha ha ha I hadn't noticed - TRUST YOU lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/15/2015 2:16:00 PM

Jan,funny write made me laugh,and think of next time I see the moon,always Tony

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 2:21:00 PM

Its a rare phenomena Tony but it can occassionally be seen on a Friday or Saturday night lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2015 1:33:00 PM

Too much information! LOL!! Sara Thanks for stopping by..

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 1:35:00 PM

I was VERY careful with the image I chose Sara lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/15/2015 1:32:00 PM

ha! you're hilarious, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 1:35:00 PM

Glad to know my British humour is understood - thankfully there are wonderful people like you to support me:-) hugs Jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/15/2015 1:31:00 PM

Hey I was slow to understand. Now I got it. " full moon" on view...on dropping trousers. Awesome. Witty. Great sense of humour...#7

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 1:34:00 PM

I know of someone who claims to do it regularly after a night on the beer - thankfully I have never witnessed this event lol:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/15/2015 12:50:00 PM

Nice picture of the Moon. I feel haze in shimmering alcoholic light here. Beautifully done. 7 is sure. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 12:53:00 PM

Thanks as ever BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/15/2015 11:38:00 AM

Jan, this is quite a witty senryu! Very original take on the moon "dropping his trousers." Love it! Always a seven. Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xx