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I saw you yesterday

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I saw you yesterday

I saw you yesterday

I saw you yesterday, your features grinned,
some silken scarf was waving in the blue,
I thought of what the rains could not rescind;
our images, that in the fields imbue.

I saw tempestuous, around me shades,
the rain's persistence had engraved your name
upon the slate, around she formed cascades,
inviting flash amid the drops, and flame.

I saw flash yesterday, inside the rain,
how beautiful it was, her kiss of dew
your words became my sails on trip arcane 
the clouds, your messengers, 'mid skies to strew.

I sensed the crooked line reticulate,
the sulfur acrid smell and pale flame's hue,
transmuting to abderian road skate,
zigzagging on a water copper tube.

The flame transformed to runnel flowing laughs;
the rustling of droplets on the leaves,
combined the bright and shapely drawing graphs
with clouds to form above, celestial eaves.

I saw flash yesterday, my features grinned,
like silken scarf was waving in the blue,
I thought of what the rains could not rescind:
two images, amidst the fields imbue.

© G. V., 10-21-2013, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic pentameter)

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  1. Date: 4/19/2014 10:31:00 PM
    Atmospheric wonder

  1. Date: 2/20/2014 11:00:00 AM
    Thank you all, friends. :)

  1. Date: 2/20/2014 6:16:00 AM
    A perfect 10 poem, and a fav...... Skat

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 6:20:00 PM
    This poem is just beautiful, and it flows so effortlessly! I loved this poem the first time that I read it, and I believe that I faved it! Congratulations on your well deserved win, Giorgio!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem!

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 6:35:00 AM
    Nice win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 4:08:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:54:00 PM
    A lovely write for a lovely lady....beautiful images you painted with your words. congrats on an excellent win! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Congrats, Giorgio! I love this poem.I had added it to my faves last time.

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Hi, Giorgio, stopping by with a smiles, and love. Thank you for supporting me in anyway possible here on the soup. You are a true friend. One of the most gifted poets on the soup. I hope you did not mind the spotlight I gave your poem last week. A #1 the first time I read the poem. Had to catch and read every line 3 times. the imagery was way to deep.... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win again. xox.LINDA

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:29:00 PM
    A beautiful dedication for an awesome mistress on soup. Big congrats on your outright victory.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Giorgio this is a beautiful poem very well done

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Conratulations on your win Giorgio, This was an exiting and well written poem. Your friend in poetry....Roger

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 3:11:00 AM
    This is not only an outstanding poem but an excellent and super lovely dedication to a very very dear friend and sis of OURS here at soup my very dear friend Giorgio. I love it so much as well. Going to my FAVE. TYSM for it & eeeverything! MY BIGGEST HEARTFELT CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR GOLDEN SHINING WIN! Happy weekend and 1st day of Dec! love lots always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:51:00 PM
    Beautiful lines and a lovely dedication to PD, Giorgio! Congrats to you on your first place win in her contest! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 6:15:00 PM
    I love how you recalled the first stanza at the end. So beautiful and full of emotion. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Excellent poetry Giorgio, and great tribute to a wonderful lady, congrats on your win, you have no competition, you're better than good, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:32:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio, I'm awake right now, my fiance' watching tv...... , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 1:32:00 PM
    I like the scene, rhyme, and expression of your view. Giorgio, the passion and message are clear in which she sends... always~ LINDA..

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Beautiful Giorgio :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:46:00 AM
    I really like the line "like silken scarf was waving in the blue"..Creative work penned..Enjoyed reading it today..Sara