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I Remember Clearly

it is my past. What can I say? Happened long ago or yesterday You see, there was this girl. She was my friend, I knew her well, too well actually. She would dress up each night, make up beautifully And step out in her heels. Night life was her thing Ooooooooooooooo, there was this other girl For her, she liked to be asked out Expensive dinners and after sex Morning after pills and shameful regrets Time after time, was her thing. Did I tell you about this one night, The night she almost died! With all her friends gone, to sleep their liquor off She kept wondering, "why am I doing all this?" Why am I wasting away my life As she kept throwing up continuously Terrible night it really was, she was at the edge of death! But i Bless the Lord for that night, for when She woke the next morning She was changed!! Her mind made up, I need Jesus. Alleluia, Glory to God! And like I said at the start," what can I say" It is my past.

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Date: 5/21/2016 12:49:00 AM
Yatubeera Resty,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/19/2016 1:31:00 PM
Yatubeera Resty Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/19/2016 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem in which beauty/hope (She) would dress up each night, make up beautifully And step out in her heels. I enjoyed the ineffable past.
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