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I Must Go On

Sometimes the path I walk gets so narrow, And in my heart I feel the pain of arrows. (IF : Dorian Petersen Potter) I must go on through the blades Through the rough seas infested with sharks I must go on when my limbs fall off By the gravity of death When my last drop of blood drains I must go beyond death I must live on for those who kill me. (Inspired by the poem "IF" by Dorian Petersen Potter)

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Date: 11/19/2014 9:06:00 AM
deep intriguing write . :) thanks much for the visits.. :)
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/19/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Olive for your lovely comments.Hugs! RAJAT
Date: 11/17/2014 6:55:00 PM
What can I say Rajat my dear friend, this is very deep. Well penned! I'm so humbled that I inspired you with it. lol...You gave it the humorous side of life. Good for you! A 7 for you! lol... :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/18/2014 12:03:00 AM
Love DXXX Take care ))) rajat
Date: 11/17/2014 12:25:00 PM
A very deep poem you have penned. It is always nice to be inspired by another person's writings. Well done. love phyl
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/18/2014 12:02:00 AM
Thank you Phyllis, great. Love. Take care ))) rajat

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