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i missed your birthday

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i missed your birthday

Those 24 hours
I missed loving you
1440 minutes passed by
with no mention of you
86400 seconds my heart
was off duty
I wish with all my heart
I could make up with my Cutie

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  1. Date: 1/25/2012 7:36:00 PM
    I searched and searched to find one I"d not yet seen and found this CUTIE!! VEry nice one, john.

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 2:04:00 PM
    24 hours can seem like forever. Hope all is well with you and time means nothing again!

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 9:02:00 AM
    very well penned, I envy your cutie ;)

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 5:15:00 PM
    Interesting work..Don't know what it is about exactly..If it is personal or if it is just about love with a little spat..Have not heard from you in awhile..The site being down and my time on now hurried and irregular hard to catch everyone..Sara

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 11/9/2011 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    none ya
  1. Date: 10/22/2011 11:56:00 AM
    Sounds like someone special . Have a nice weekend. love phyl