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I Know This Is Paradise

I know this is paradise The moon light beats upon the Window pane and as it does Reflects the hectic, frantic Mood of this part of my life. Bouncing back off reflections Show the mayhem that swallows Us whole as we spin madly Drinking more drunker, drunker Falling back into darkness To be absorbed by it all I know this is paradise, The morning after. Headaches, Tired limbs, weary faces But still jokes roll off our tongues Reliving and discussing All the infrequent interests That tend to break their cover And surface during such nights I know this is paradise Even in my lowest hour mid-night but to long past twelve early into the morning a break of pace, contemplate What other things could have been Though they’re beyond your control I know this is paradise I’m surrounded by those I love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 11:50:00 AM
Jack, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2009 10:08:00 AM
Enjoyed this way back in November and here it is in April and a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations, Jack and good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Jack. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:55:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 3/30/2009 2:58:00 PM
Congrats on making the next round - enjoyable reading..
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:03:00 AM
Jack - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:20:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:32:00 PM
Interesting write here, Jack. I think you might want to change a word in the second section line 4 however ... it should read "roll" instead of role, don't you think? They're going to get a little tougher in the 2nd round here so congrats on "first round survival" and good luck!! Hope you don't mind my pointing that out ... smile ...
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:20:00 PM
Jack - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:21:00 PM
Hello Jack Congrats on making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations Jack on your featured write of the week. Awesome poem! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 7:48:00 AM
That says it all. Congratulations on "I Know This Is Paradise" being a featured poem. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 8:01:00 PM
Wonderful poem about the love of a family - congrats on being featured
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