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I Hope You Suffer

Eileen  Manassian Avatar Eileen  Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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I Hope You Suffer

I hope one day you suffer
I hope one day you burn
I hope  one day you pay
For the love you have spurned

I hope you feel the torment
I hope you feel jagged thorn
I hope that you long to die
As in sackcloth black you mourn

I hope you feel less than dirt
I hope you twist with such pain
I hope betrayal drives you
Stark raving mad and insane

I hope one day you're haunted
I hope in terror you scream
I hope at nighttime you see
A nightmare in place of dream

I hope one day SOON you bleed
With a spear thrust in your side
Wounded for killing my love
Your soul not able to hide

Yes, it may be pure evil
It may be a heinous crime
But for my heart's rejection
I hope you get to do time

Yes, I hope that you suffer
I hope that you wail and weep
It will soothe my aching heart
That you didn’t want to keep

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:43:00 PM
    powerful piece of writing excellent piece

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:31:00 PM
    Wow WOW Wow, Well done and I also give you a hug!!!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:05:00 PM
    I likes this, can hear you screaaming this at some poor unfortunate guy lol, I think you've typed 'you' instead of 'one' in the third line, see, I take in every word you write. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Ow gee sometimes when im very angry i sound so much like your verse but then when I calm down I see things differently.This is very deep.Lets roar girl and scare the lion away..big smile : )

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:35:00 PM
    wow! i'd hate to be on the receiving end of this! you've gotten a lot of your anger out here, though, which is a great place to do so...

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Wowser!! You should add "But other than that you're a great guy"! LOL Powerful stuff!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/13/2013 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Craig. Sometimes it's good to vent, right? We can't be "good" all the time. Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Wow. I could clearly and distinctly feel the scorn and enmity you are conveying here. Very strong, spiteful and venomous; I can absolutely relate to these feelings. Great job articulating your malice! Kudos :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/13/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow! Malice...pretty strong word. I would say it was just a hope that the person gets a taste of his own medicine. But...You call it as you see it. Thanks for dropping by.
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:04:00 AM
    yep, I would say a lot of us feel that way when rejected. ME LIKES

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/13/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, dear Andrea. Glad that you have saved me from being seen as a monster. I think these are natural feelings. How we deal with them is completely another matter. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:39:00 AM
    - Yes, there is a lot of pain in this poem Eileen ..... power full written! - All the best to you dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/13/2013 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Sunshine. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Pain lets us know we are still alive and alerts us to trouble, so....I guess we can't live without it. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:48:00 AM
    I can feel your pain with every word within this tremendous write my friend! Wow, the power behind your lines is so amazing I can surely feel your heartache! I loved reading this awesome poem this morning Eileen! What a glorious piece, Great Work!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/13/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Russell....being able to empathize is a very beautiful thing. Hugs
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:43:00 AM
    A poem of passion and angst. Well written

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 10/13/2013 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Justice, you bring me joy