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I Hope You Suffer

I hope one day you suffer I hope one day you burn I hope one day you pay For the love you have spurned I hope you feel the torment I hope you feel jagged thorn I hope that you long to die As in sackcloth black you mourn I hope you feel less than dirt I hope you twist with such pain I hope betrayal drives you Stark raving mad and insane I hope one day you're haunted I hope in terror you scream I hope at nighttime you see A nightmare in place of dream I hope one day SOON you bleed With a spear thrust in your side Wounded for killing my love Your soul not able to hide Yes, it may be pure evil It may be a heinous crime But for my heart's rejection I hope you get to do time Yes, I hope that you suffer I hope that you wail and weep It will soothe my aching heart That you didn’t want to keep Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/14/2013 1:43:00 PM

powerful piece of writing excellent piece

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/13/2013 9:31:00 PM

Wow WOW Wow, Well done and I also give you a hug!!!!

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/13/2013 6:05:00 PM

I likes this, can hear you screaaming this at some poor unfortunate guy lol, I think you've typed 'you' instead of 'one' in the third line, see, I take in every word you write. Take care, Richard

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/13/2013 4:44:00 PM

Ow gee sometimes when im very angry i sound so much like your verse but then when I calm down I see things differently.This is very deep.Lets roar girl and scare the lion away..big smile : )

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/13/2013 4:35:00 PM

wow! i'd hate to be on the receiving end of this! you've gotten a lot of your anger out here, though, which is a great place to do so...

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 10/13/2013 9:35:00 AM

Wow. I could clearly and distinctly feel the scorn and enmity you are conveying here. Very strong, spiteful and venomous; I can absolutely relate to these feelings. Great job articulating your malice! Kudos :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2013 1:58:00 PM

Wow! Malice...pretty strong word. I would say it was just a hope that the person gets a taste of his own medicine. But...You call it as you see it. Thanks for dropping by.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2013 9:04:00 AM

yep, I would say a lot of us feel that way when rejected. ME LIKES

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2013 1:59:00 PM

Thanks, dear Andrea. Glad that you have saved me from being seen as a monster. I think these are natural feelings. How we deal with them is completely another matter. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2013 8:39:00 AM

- Yes, there is a lot of pain in this poem Eileen ..... power full written! - All the best to you dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2013 2:00:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Pain lets us know we are still alive and alerts us to trouble, so....I guess we can't live without it. Hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/13/2013 6:48:00 AM

I can feel your pain with every word within this tremendous write my friend! Wow, the power behind your lines is so amazing I can surely feel your heartache! I loved reading this awesome poem this morning Eileen! What a glorious piece, Great Work!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2013 2:01:00 PM

Thanks, Russell....being able to empathize is a very beautiful thing. Hugs

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/13/2013 1:43:00 AM

A poem of passion and angst. Well written

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/13/2013 2:03:00 PM

Justice, you bring me joy