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I Held Her In My Arms

I held her in my trembling arms for the First time And The unfailing sensation, of embracing The cosmos, I felt! © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 August 2015 POTD

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David Meade

Date: 8/23/2015 9:07:00 PM

Marvelous my dear friend -- to hold a precious life is a divine gift.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2015 5:52:00 AM

Your visits, a treat my friend, David. Thank you!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/22/2015 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on this romantic piece being chosen as POTD, my dear poet. Great write.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Eileen, for your constant visits and kind comments. I appreciate it enormously!

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/22/2015 2:41:00 PM

You captured her...You captured us and the Universe. Congrats to you!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:40:00 PM

So gracious of you to comment in such a generous manner! Thank you, dear Edlynn!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2015 2:05:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats for poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:41:00 PM

Your visits and comments is a source of joy, dear Jan. Thank you so much!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/22/2015 1:46:00 PM

Tremendous piece my friend...so romantic...well deserved POTD

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:39:00 PM

My friend, Tim, always present to comment! Thank you from the depths of my heart!

Constance La France

Date: 8/22/2015 1:39:00 PM

Congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:43:00 PM

It is extremely noble of your part to take the time to visit. Thank you very much dear, Broken Wings!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2015 11:36:00 AM

Stunningly beautiful! Congratulations on having this gem selected as POTD!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:44:00 PM

Connie, my friend, thank you so much for your kind words.

James Inman

Date: 8/22/2015 10:22:00 AM

Epigram, interesting form choice for such a lovely poem.

James Inman
Date: 8/22/2015 9:18:00 PM

I agree, Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:46:00 PM

Well, all forms of poetry are equally powerful, if there is love in our hearts, dear James. Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2015 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations on Poem of the Day my friend, your inspirational spiritual writes are always so beautiful. Hugs Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:48:00 PM

Dearest Eve, your presence is always a beautiful site! Thank you so much for your kind visits and comments! God bless you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2015 9:12:00 AM

An eternity felt within a single embrace! What a lovely piece.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:49:00 PM

I think you agree with me on that, my good friend, Richard. Thank you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2015 9:12:00 AM

I see this is POTD, congratulations.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 6:50:00 PM

Thank you my friend, Richard!

Judy Konos

Date: 8/22/2015 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on Poem of the Day...BIG 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2015 12:03:00 AM

Judy, my dear, I appreciate your lovely visit and comment. Thank you!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2015 8:32:00 AM

This is truly romantic Demi! deep down you are a Mediterranean man!~ This also reminds me of when I held my first new-born child! ~ Congrats on POTD honour! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 8:37:00 AM

Thank you for your honoring visit, Paul. If Greeks are not Mediterranean who are then my friend?

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/22/2015 7:55:00 AM

Hello, sire. Congratulations on having this poem chosen as POTD. Thank you too, for the visit earlier. hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much for this and your previous vist, dear Kim

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/22/2015 5:47:00 AM

I stopped by to say congratulations on having this well deserved piece selected as the poem of the day!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 5:56:00 AM

Welcome Alexis Y. I didn't know anything! Thank you so much. You so kind!

Laura Hay

Date: 8/22/2015 3:45:00 AM

Wonderfully done, congrats on POTD, warm regards, Laura.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2015 5:55:00 AM

Thank you for being the bearers of good news. I ignored it! Thank you so much. You are lovely!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2015 2:20:00 AM

Very lovely....... a perfect expression!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:45:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma, for taking the time to visit and comment!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/20/2015 7:43:00 PM

A lovely and beautiful, your descriptive is eloquence...........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:46:00 AM

My friend, A.M. how nice to receive your visit again. Thank you!

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/20/2015 10:48:00 AM

Wow, I just love it when a man is able to eloquently express what he felt at his most vulnerable moment with his beloved. Fantastic poem, sire. 7 and will save this to my favs! hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:47:00 AM

If the feelings are true then the heart knows how to express them, dear Kim. Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/20/2015 10:07:00 AM

Sensational write, my dear poet. What a beautiful and romantic piece.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:48:00 AM

Nothing is more pleasing to me than expressing my admiration for beauty, dear Eileen. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment!

Anu Nayak

Date: 8/20/2015 7:27:00 AM

Dear Demetrios, romantic and awesome imagery...embracing the cosmos! adorable write..a 7!...love, Anu:-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:51:00 AM

Every lady could be the Cosmos for a man in love! I am certain you have been the Cosmos for someone, dear Anulaxmi if not then something is wrong with men! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a noble way!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/20/2015 6:45:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi, for your precious visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 5:07:00 AM

wow what a beautiful romantic poem Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx soupmail xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:52:00 AM

Only romantic hearts as yours could appreciate my poem and for that I thank you, Dear Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2015 4:57:00 AM

- I have to read one poem, before I rushing on .... and it must be your beautiful poem, dear friend Demetrios - I wish you a lovely day :) - (Today the house be be cleaned from top to bottom) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:53:00 AM

Anne Lise, my friend, I hope all will be fine soon and you will be back in full swing! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Michael Tor

Date: 8/20/2015 2:44:00 AM

She must have been real special.. Nice poem made me go back in time to a special moment. I hope we all have them.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/21/2015 5:44:00 AM

Welcome my new friend, Michael. Thank you for your kind visit and comment!