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I Have Stolen Your Heart

I have stolen your heart.... I have stolen your heart without you even know Now I have you in my soul and not going to let you go You become my life now without any condition And my hands will hold around your neck with affections My heart is longing for your love which can be found nowhere. There is a special place for you in my heart where I only can touch it and feel the rhythm The moon never beams without loving your heart either the stars cannot twinkle without seeing your eyes You light up my world and make my heart so proud but bring me tears in the nights without you being close to me There is no life without love and there is no love without you Even every memory of yours holds me as treasure and every thought brings you close to my heart Not only I have stolen your heart but also I have release my soul deep with your love Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved 2014

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Date: 9/8/2014 5:55:00 PM
excellent piece very beautifully painted
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/9/2014 6:35:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated
Date: 9/8/2014 5:54:00 PM
This is very sweet, Ravi. I have one little suggestion to improve one line. Don't say wrap your hands around the neck. Just say your "arms"around a person's shoulders, or even neck, but hands around the neck sounds like you want to choke someone!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/9/2014 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for your comment my poem Andrea. Appreciated. Thanks again for your suggestion to improve on my work. It will be done as you have said it. Love and Hugs.xxxRavi
Date: 9/8/2014 8:33:00 AM
A beautiful love story I much enjoyed. :-) Christine
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/9/2014 6:37:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated
Date: 9/8/2014 8:07:00 AM
To release your soul...how beautiful...... Tim
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/9/2014 6:38:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated
Date: 9/8/2014 7:07:00 AM
Ahh!!! Passionate work..Enjoyed reading your love story..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:56:00 AM
- When you want something with all your heart and soul ....- It always gives a positive force - Beautiful poem my friend, Ravi - Have a nice new week with love :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/9/2014 6:38:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Anne. Appreciated. Love and hugs xxx
Date: 9/8/2014 5:29:00 AM
With such beauty and intensity of feelings only a winner in the battlefield of love you will be dear Ravi!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/9/2014 6:38:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated
Date: 9/8/2014 4:23:00 AM
Really you did it! A good poem to read Siva!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/8/2014 4:48:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Ravi

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