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I Got To Say Adios

(I am inspired to write this poem by three Hollywood Movies (1)* The movie: Art of crying (2)** The Cruel Intentions II (3)*** Julienne Moore starer (I don't remember the name of the movie) Hola I am Ram Mehta, I am going To say adios to this damn,..damn da.. To the world of Movies where cars are houses Houses are storehouses….fed up with this life style I am going to say adios to that world where the boy Friends, girl-friends Friends of all types and kinds are easily Avaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiii l a b l e just for asking only BUT but but buttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Batteries not included I am going to say adios to that worlddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd Where the Girls Are looking for fun, but.. But…what should I say yay "Batterries to be recharged." I am going to say adios to that world where a son is enamoured of his Own..own, (I am shamed to say, O.K. will write,) “mother” And ……………. And …………And a father seeks his own Damn (I got to write) hhhhhh “Own daughter” in bed Still shameful is… An unmarried girl wants a child of Her own, her mother takes her to the city to get Pregnant like …likekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkke A shepherd takes the cows to the BULL. Adieu Adieu Adieu +++++++ March 18, 2014 Form : Concrete Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Danger by Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:36:00 PM
Dr. , CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/27/2014 5:20:00 AM
you are a very terrific poet, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 3/25/2014 11:37:00 PM
I can see how passionately angered you are by this life style and rightly so, Dr. Ram. Great shape you took with it. That one line likekkkkkkk looks like it needs to be centered. then it will be perfect. And I see you got a top win. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:37:00 PM
i like seeing something different from you and with substance at that, dr.ram.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:37:00 PM
i lile seeing something different from you and with substance at that, dr.ram.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:46:00 PM
What a great piece,,Congrats on the win
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Date: 3/22/2014 9:29:00 PM
Thanks, Sheri, for my placement
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Date: 3/22/2014 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram, great way to say adieu, and fly away. Like your form and poem.
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Date: 3/22/2014 8:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 3/22/2014 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram... This is very creative in appearance and the words do make the difference... Verlena
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Date: 3/19/2014 12:15:00 AM
I believe "namaste" is the equivalent of "hola" or "adios". The shape of this presentation reminds me of a hot air balloon. Good work Dr. Ram.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/19/2014 1:11:00 AM
Namaste is equivalent of Holla or hello. yiu're right, roberrt
Date: 3/18/2014 3:06:00 PM
Really inspiring write. I was taken by not only the words, but format and layout ! xx~Xx
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Date: 3/18/2014 12:25:00 PM
this is AAAAAWWWWEEEESSSOOOMMMMEEE!!!!!! ....YEAH, Dr. RaM, you are a poet guru... :")) ...your words are unique, the stlye, the depth of its knowledge... it's an honor to have known you.. ^__^ APPLAUSE!!! ^__^
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