I Closed My Door Unto the World

Proud Flags of a Fool unfurled- Fell upon Life's jagged rocks I closed my Door unto the World, But, alas! It has no locks!

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/21/2013 6:24:00 PM

Chan This is a uniquely creative written poem. AAAWWW you fell on sharp rocks. I fix your boo boos. LOL And buy you a lock for your door. HEE HEE Hugs Thanks for the sweet comment on my Wonderful World poem.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/22/2013 4:49:00 AM

lol Thanks for the read, Robin <3

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/15/2013 10:15:00 AM

Love this! The imagery rocks and the rhyme is impeccable, as usual :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/15/2013 11:53:00 AM

Thanks, love. I think it has a "Dickinson-esque" feel to it; well, the last 2 lines, anyways ;)