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I close my eyes

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I close my eyes

It was the summer,we were together                                                                                         It felt right to be there,living our lives everyday                                                                           I close my eyes and you are still there                                                                                        All the things that were,are now fading                                                                                     I can see the hurt in my eyes which the mirror reflects                                                            All the love that was there,I'm now regretting                                                                            Things were left unsaid and you went your own way                                                                  Never bothered to explain                                                                                                        The shadows fill the empty spaces,now that you are no more                                                    Your memories haunt me like the dead                                                                                        It's like each ghost returning each day                                                                                         Every spark of love goes away                                                                                                   Now I know just the ashes remain                                                                                              I close my eyes,you turn away                                                                                                      I close my eyes and you go away.

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  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:29:00 PM
    loosing the ones we love is more painful than dying, trying to change the past is not worth trying. I'm sorry for your loss.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Hey Pranky your poem is wonderful and Its inspiring'. Keep up the good work.. Love Jess :)