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I can be civil, I can be polite, In hypocrisy I take no delight I don't trust easy Not quick to confide I'm intuitive In that I take pride I seem to discern What comes and what goes but a truthful heart... That easily shows I can be civil I can be polite But just to pretend That's simply not right! Eileen I'm the kind of person who wears her heart out on her sleeve. When I'm not happy, it shows. When I'm hurt, it shows. When I'm upset, it shows. I try my best to be honest. I try. I guess at times, that is all one can do. Try.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/18/2014 4:26:00 PM
I have no doubt concearning your honesty. I do wish at times that you were kinder to yourself.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 4:28:00 PM
Richard. Richard...Your faith in me keeps me strong. I wish I loved myself more. I used to. I'm getting a bit better, I think. I don't know....I guess time will tell. Thank you for visiting me. Post something so I can read you again. Hugs to your Mom.
Date: 12/18/2014 5:23:00 AM
I love who you are dear Eileen..
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:26:00 AM
I'm grateful, Charmaine. I'm so grateful. You've proven to be a good dear friend. Thank you for believing the good in me. I'm not always easy...I know that. But when I DO love, I love with all my heart. Bless you.
Date: 12/18/2014 4:05:00 AM
To be honest with oneself is the greatest achievement, before achieving knowledge of oneself! As I have said: Your writing has matured in beauty and content! Excellent dear, Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:31:00 AM
You are a philosopher, my dear poet. Your wisdom has always been a light to me. Thank you for your lovely post. I wish you every blessing. I love Greek. That is what first made me click on your link more than a year ago....You had no avatar up at the time. Now...I can see your lovely face! :) I'm thankful for your presence.
Date: 12/17/2014 8:24:00 PM
I think I get it -- what you see is what you get . . . and what I see is a wonderful, delightful, smart, articulate, funny, beautiful . . . lovely woman!! Well done my little one!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:35:00 AM
David....Words of affirmation mean so much to me. I can never get enough of kind words that boost my self-esteem. Sometimes it is really love....and I suffer from depression. So, thank you for being free with your compliments. They mean a great deal to me...
Date: 12/17/2014 8:14:00 PM
Eileen, I agree with David it is a rare thing to be able to expose your inner feelings and self, his is a unique write from a unique writer great job on this work that came straight from your inner being, nicely done, cheri
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:50:00 AM
Cheri, thanks ever so much for your lovely post. I'm touched that you would take the time to read and post this lovely comment. Bless you. Hugs
Date: 12/17/2014 5:15:00 PM
The ability and courage to be vulnerable is what truly sets you apart, Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:53:00 AM
How kind of you, David. It's not always easy being vulnerable. I'm often hurt, and unfortunately, I'm learning to be more cautious and discerning. I'm tired of hurting. I'm sure I hurt others as well...perhaps due to my insecurities, but...I speak my mind and try not to be fake, if I can. :) Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 12/17/2014 4:33:00 PM
I love your heart my dear friend..hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:54:00 AM
:) Thank you, Tim. It's always great to have friends who know your quirks and love you anyway! :) Hope all is well.
Date: 12/17/2014 4:27:00 PM
A simple truth stated eloquently.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/18/2014 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, John. Sometimes its better to use brevity to make a point. I tend to go on and on. Thanks for seeing this little piece in a positive light.
Date: 12/17/2014 4:00:00 PM
Brillaintly penned and the final stanza packs a powerful punch Eileen:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/18/2014 6:57:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Hope all is well. Life is getting crazy around here. Have to prepare for a Christmas assembly for the university. Keep me in your thoughts. It's this Monday, at 11:00am....That's 9:00am London time! ;) Say a little prayer for me and for the success of the program. Hugs

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