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I Blow My Kiss

With the wind this eve, I blow my kiss in perchance it makes your door It will sit and wait with the olive tree, the crimson rose, and all that you adore and in your morn when you appear it'll land softly 'pon your cheek there it'll rest til the day is done surrounded by mystique In the midst of night it'll start to speak as you begin to doze and dream of a life so sweet and a love so strong under stars that shine and gleam

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Date: 11/3/2016 4:50:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Tim. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainey
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Date: 11/2/2016 8:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely rhyme. Soft and warm.
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Date: 10/24/2016 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Tim, for your WIN with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 10/19/2016 10:58:00 PM
To blow a kiss to my love... to him receiving it like this? It's so wonderful, congratulations!
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:45:00 PM
Hi Tim, I found this piece to be romantic and so poetic as well. Congratulations on your fin win. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/20/2015 10:27:00 AM
My friend, not only is this a great love poem but it is also an extremely smooth flowing inspirational , concise rhyme ! A7 but truly this one deserves a super 10.. BRAVO!!!
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:18:00 PM
I love the romantic vein that runs through these beautiful lines, Tim. #7 // paul
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Date: 8/23/2015 1:19:00 AM
beautiful, and the flow and this line "it'll land softly 'pon your cheek" amazing
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Date: 8/22/2015 5:11:00 PM
Mystique !!!This rose that bleeds..and Olive trees..Lovely!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/22/2015 5:15:00 PM
yes mystique....charisma · glamour · romance · mystery · magic · charm · appeal : )
Date: 8/22/2015 1:17:00 PM
I love this Tim! It is going into my favorites. One of your most romantic pieces I have read. 7
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:02:00 AM
very sweet and lovely writing. Romance in the air! (don't worry, I will always be a Peter pan child inside!!)
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Date: 8/22/2015 5:16:00 AM
What a kiss! What a night! What a dream! Superb my friend, Tim! A seven!
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Date: 8/21/2015 4:25:00 PM
so beautiful and romantic Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2015 6:24:00 PM
Thank you Jan

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