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I awake....alone at times like this it seems... I'm forever alone the bed is empty no human form I'm alone Well, that's not completely true I have a bedfellow He keeps me awake chases my dreams away..... Mr Insomnia is attention mad it's all about him and that makes him glad He wants his loving... and the hours pass they pass Dawn chases him away Gives me another lover Slumber comes to bed me sinks in and has his way... a gentle sway rocks me deep rocks me slow takes me places he wants to go Tired... he tires of me leaves in a hurry no afterglow or dreamy flow Rude awakening I'm alone again alone.... Alone to think alone to know that it is so: another trip another.... "It's work, Babe. What can I do? A strong woman, make this work for you." another tear another sigh another time for another cry Alone... Insomnia comes and goes Slumber comes and goes the days pass in haunting haze adding to my inner craze alone Underlying theme? Devise a scheme Make real the dream: a peaceful forever alone... Eileen

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Date: 5/24/2016 7:28:00 AM
Perhaps when we are able to just be, we will discover that what we have is more then we could ever possibly want. When we pine for wishes we are unable to experience the amazing that has been gifted to us in the now. These are my thoughts after reading your response to Demetrios.
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Date: 5/22/2016 2:43:00 PM
I have never suffered from insomnia, Eileen, but once in a blue moon, if I go to bed very late, I find it hard to sleep, maybe because of being over tired, and it's not a nice thing! I suppose being alone at home is one reason why you feel like this. Having family around you soon should partly solve the problem. hugs // paul
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Date: 5/22/2016 5:08:00 AM
So many famous poets have led lives like this. One day happiness will come to sweep you away. A lovely bitter sweet poem Eileen! #7. ; )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/22/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thanks, Connie! :) Perhaps one day I will do an episode on youtube of all the poets I know who have come up with their own forms of poetry and I can read my Constanza poem...and My Suzette Prime poem...and my questionku...and I can mention You, and Suzette, and Richard. Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs, dear...
Date: 5/22/2016 5:08:00 AM
- Even the loneliness has a voice - Loneliness is not being alone ... but to not have any to miss, dear Eileen - A beautiful poem with inner sense from your heart - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/22/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thanks, dearest Sunshine. :) You brighten my day...always. Hugs to you...I'll be by to visit you in exactly one minute! :)
Date: 5/22/2016 4:15:00 AM
Although the poem is touching the sad side I loved it for its flow and reality! It is very beautiful and loved it dear, Eileen! A seven my dearest! Hugs kai filakia for not to be alone! Haha!
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:41:00 AM
Efkharisto...gia ta filakia. :) Esai poli kalos! Ah....the loneliness will abate. The next week or so will be mad. I have family coming tonight...my husband tomorrow night....my father, Thursday night...It will be a mad house...and perhaps I will long to be alone again. :) That is life....we never have what we want. Hugs, dear one.

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