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I Am Your Life Time Gentleman

The nicely placed apartments of your heart are ready to let I’ll rent and cover them all in blue and scarlet. Now upgraded, shark and Dolphin can never be alike so that, even your laughter fashions in designers, better than Nike. Your happiness, more resounding than a thousand-singer choir the re-branding job of the melody of your existence; I’m up for hire. Under the command of your feelings like a trained loyal animal, I inject sweet mischief to our romance like a mid-night criminal. My bow to your passion’s fire is no magic, my submission to our mysterious connection has nothing tragic. That seductive poison makes me your everlasting patient, to such an irresistible intensity, so ancient. Your high-tech comfort because of me is making lots of sense to enjoy the resulting glory, I’ll still wait for your license. My doings are unrealistically pleasurable like a fictional movie but the testament of your satisfaction will be our live TV.

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/16/2015 2:43:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Ravi

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/15/2015 8:17:00 PM

Funom, your first line a catchy one and as I go along its more..! Beautiful!~Olive ELoisa =')

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Olive Eloisa

Herzel Poshiwa

Date: 7/13/2015 9:27:00 AM

Long time friend. This is an excellent piece.......

Herzel Poshiwa
Date: 7/29/2015 7:56:00 AM

I am well friend, allow me to go and devour your writings my friend...lol

Funom Makama
Date: 7/16/2015 1:19:00 PM

Yeah... My lovely friend. I miss your presence here. How are you?

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/12/2015 2:00:00 PM

Funom, Congratulations on POTD!! Most Excellent Work!! Cheers, Gary

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Gary Bateman

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/12/2015 8:31:00 AM

Extremely visual poetry, a joy to read.

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:48:00 AM

thank you very much..... I really appreciate harry

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/11/2015 1:26:00 PM

An amazing write with a very unique poem. love phyl

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Phyllis Babcock

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/10/2015 3:38:00 PM

A hearty congratulations dear poet friend for your amazing piece which has been awarded Poem of the Day status!! Kudos for an excellent write and a 7! Pandita

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Pandita Sanchez

Eve Roper

Date: 7/10/2015 2:15:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on Poem of the Day. Hugs Eve

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve.. *Hugs* *Hugs*

Catherine Labeau

Date: 7/10/2015 2:10:00 PM

T V my rabbit ears refuse cable and they keep insisting that I need it but with Roku I am fine and eat an apple from my garden in Brooklyn how amazing is that

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Catherine labeau

Jan Allison

Date: 7/10/2015 1:17:00 PM

congrats on poem of the day with your romantic write:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan Allison

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/10/2015 12:07:00 PM

Made me smile, Funom. Very smart, in the form of romanticism with the lover so well-entrenched in modern comforts. Congrats on your POTD!

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim Patrice Nunez

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/10/2015 7:48:00 AM

Funom, congrats on getting the poem of the day:-)Alexis

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 7/9/2015 5:52:00 PM

Funom, this is a romantic poem I found interesting to go read and re-read. I especially liked this line:"I inject sweet mischief to our romance like a mid-night criminal".

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Ndaba

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2015 4:01:00 PM

very nice, Funom. You have not been here too recently, have you. It's great getting a comment from you today.

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:38:00 AM

yes Andrea... I've been working serious.. Its not easy being a doctor and a poet at the same time. Thank you so much for stopping by

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2015 2:31:00 PM

Interesting work..When one opens up their heart for another to enter it is a very serious relationship..I hope that each will treat the arrangement with soft gloves..Enjoyed reading t his one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 7/9/2015 12:37:00 PM

There is nothing quite as sweet as knowing you have a permanent home in someones heart, especially if they have already redecorated yours. This is a lovely creative write on a romantic theme. Loved the modern overtones. Jan

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:35:00 AM

yes Jaycee.... Thank you for your soft comment.

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/9/2015 12:04:00 PM

Your romantic piece is full of creative metaphors, and very enjoyable to read, Funom! The object of your affection must be a very lucky girl, indeed :)

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Laura Leiser

Len Gasun

Date: 7/9/2015 9:22:00 AM

I'm so delighted to read this excellent romantic poem of yours my dear friend, Funom. Great job my dear friend! Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time stopping by to read one of my humble works. God bless! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 8:32:00 AM

thank you so much Leonora

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/9/2015 9:16:00 AM

Wow!, Funom. I am in awe of your metaphoric adoration. An Italian hug!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/9/2015 8:40:00 AM

I'm in awe of the opening line. What a spectacular metaphor. The rest of the poem lives up to the standard. Well done, and may I tweet a link to this piece soon?

Eve Roper

Date: 7/9/2015 8:13:00 AM

Wonderful discripiton of your heart for rent a 7 hugs eve

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 7/9/2015 8:11:00 AM

I enjoyed your romantic poem Fukom...and thanks for the comment...Peter

Constance La France

Date: 7/9/2015 7:41:00 AM

Funom, a heart for rent, lovely theme for your poem and thanks for visiting my fantasy poem, The Butterfly and The Dragon, actually that poem was inspired by a nasty comment on a blog to me, and I replied this sweet butterfly drifting can transform into a fire breathing dragon and thus I was inspired to write the poem . . .

Catherine Labeau

Date: 7/9/2015 7:06:00 AM

lucky the one you share your life with all tech but pick your mess or cook for you or can take the silence

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2015 2:39:00 PM

ohh, sweetly woven, fukom... well done!.. huggs