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I'm the one who'll make you dream Float you float on a cloud of cream I'm the one who’ll make them run All your demons, one by one I am the ONE I'm the one who'll make you dance Dip you in my sweet romance I'm the one who'll love you right Show you realms of sheer delight I am the ONE I am the one who'll fill your need Each desire, I will feed I’m the one who'll shower love Wet your lips from up above I am the ONE I am the one who’ll gift a smile Make each moment, one worthwhile I’m the one who’ll soothe that pain Call the sun to lick up rain I am the ONE I’m the one who’ll give her all Hear your words before you call I'm the one whose love is right Body pillow of your night I am the ONE So, I stand and bide my time Quiet in this world of rhyme Till you answer just one thing Breathing life to words I bring Are you the ONE? For Rob Carmack's the ONE contest September 9, 2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/21/2015 1:45:00 PM

Really wonderful one, soothing with full of romance. 7 sure and Good luck sure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2015 1:56:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely visit, BL. Much appreciated.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/21/2015 11:10:00 AM

I am so glad to have discovered your talent. I have searched for a previous comment, by me, on this poem. I was so sure I had left you kudos on this great write before. It is a keeper, no doubt ... CayCay

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thank you, dear. I don't remember reading a comment from you on this, but am so grateful that you have visited me again. :) I appreciate it.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/17/2015 7:16:00 AM

Boy! How I love a good rhyme and this is a Great one Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2015 2:34:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Jerry. I'm glad you liked this piece.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/17/2015 3:06:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Eileen! "So, I stand and bide my time Quiet in this world of rhyme" Love those lines! Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2015 2:34:00 PM

Hey, Laura....Thanks for your visit to my ONE poem. :) Glad to have your comment....

Skat A

Date: 9/14/2015 1:05:00 PM

Eileen, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT love :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2015 2:35:00 PM

Thanks for your visit to my ONE poem, Skat. Always appreciated.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/14/2015 6:10:00 AM

So so oozing with romance...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/17/2015 2:39:00 PM

:) Thank you, Charmaine...I do like it oozy.... ;) Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2015 4:24:00 AM

Yes certainly you are the one my sweet dear Eileen, for who else it can be!How can he ever not accept? Congrats on awesome winning write!

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/13/2015 2:12:00 PM

Your very definately ONE my little Desert Orchid, Congratulations on your win. Take care, Richard

Eve Roper

Date: 9/13/2015 12:37:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/13/2015 12:36:00 PM

Lovely and romantic take on the subject, Eileen. Congrats!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/13/2015 8:36:00 AM

This was enjoyable to read, I like it, congrats :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2015 6:23:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 9/11/2015 2:50:00 PM

filled with such beauty!

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/11/2015 11:26:00 AM

ROCK ON!!!!! "On a cloud of cream"!!! I want an éclair now!!!!! YAY FOOD STUFF!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2015 6:15:00 PM

I am the One is beautiful!!! Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2015 6:05:00 PM

Ooh la la you brought the heat! Whoever the "One" is he is one lucky guy!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 6:11:00 PM

:) Aren't you sweet, Richard....Oh...by the way...I have a new blog up, incase you want to have a look see. You will see what I really look like.... Brace yourself. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/9/2015 3:08:00 AM

Oh, yes, you are the one! Who is going to say otherwise after such an emphatic and delightful poem ? Excellent dear, Eileen!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 12:46:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely post, my dear poet. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Blessings always....Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2015 12:03:00 AM

ooh la la, love that final line!! typo in line ONE, Eileen. Hurry and fix it!! It's really cool seeing these number one poems. They actually speak volumes about the writers of them!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 12:47:00 PM

Thanks a lot, dear. You saved me! :) I corrected it. I loved having your visit....Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/8/2015 10:21:00 PM

Mmmm...Love never gambles on that question Eileen. I love that body pillow comfort, awesome!!! You are a most tender provider! The closing question is brilliant poetry Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 12:49:00 PM

I'm so sorry I'm late with my response, Justin. It's been a crazy day. I'm preparing for a trip to Greece. I leave early morning. This post of yours is absolutely fabulous. I like reading the lines that most spoke to you, Justin. Love having you visit, Eagle...Stay safe. See you on the other side.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/8/2015 6:37:00 PM

this is fabulous, eileen! you have totally nailed this for the theme!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/8/2015 6:40:00 PM

Sure hope so, sweetie. You know me....have to get romance in there for every single thing. :( I need to diversity. Thanks for the thumbs up, though. Hugs

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 9/8/2015 4:48:00 PM

Very romantic

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/8/2015 5:35:00 PM

Thank you for the visit. Much appreciated.

Jadazzle United

Date: 9/8/2015 4:15:00 PM

I am sure your hubby knows you are the one Eileen a lovely romantic write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/8/2015 5:36:00 PM

I'm writing for a contest, Jan. My signature way. Thank you for the visit.

The Situation

Date: 9/8/2015 3:48:00 PM

If it were mine I would take out all of the "I am the ONE"s until the last line. then it would be perfect.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/8/2015 5:37:00 PM

Thank you, Situation. The contest is about ONE....I guess I just wanted to emphasize that...overkill? Well, perhaps. I think I'll leave it the way it is. Thanks for the advice.